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So Lost Without You

It's driving me completely crazy- These inert thoughts of you, For where are you anyways? I just can't seem to get through. People walking, running, Just to get to a place before the clock pushes them back, And I....I sit and wait all day, -for you... Cuz' it's us that I lack. Without you, I am not me, and will never feel complete, With you I am free, full of dreams and things I can do for others and for you. Do you see it too? Or am I a romantic fool? Fulfilling destinies not made for my heart, My soul needs more of you today, And it bleeds to touch you. It's been so long since I've felt that soft kiss of your warm lips, Full of intensity and desire. You believe in me more than anyone ever will. And where are you now? How am I to live another 50 years without you? -I miss you baby...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/1/2015 9:23:00 AM
It is good to ask, in the process he will feel more wanted.
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/1/2015 10:08:00 AM
Thank you Richard once again for your kind words :)
Date: 9/29/2015 9:52:00 PM
I can feel so much the longing here, so lovely xoxo
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Date: 9/30/2015 5:33:00 PM
Thank you very much Aurore..you're kind words are appreciative.. Be blessed :)
Date: 9/29/2015 2:58:00 PM
I feel your words, Laura. Beautiful verse full of heart and longing. The ending is very touching... Always, Laura
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Date: 9/29/2015 3:57:00 PM
Thank you Laura :) It's much appreciated :)
Date: 9/29/2015 2:54:00 PM
Such a touching write Laura I am sure many can relate to your words:-( hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/29/2015 3:58:00 PM
Thank you very much Jan, have a blessed day :) -LU

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