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so it goes

The brash storm came, Wildfire spread on your wings, The flood had taken you to places, The rogue planets attacked you. The lightning struck you, The thunder made you deaf, The rain poured down your heart, Your map made you lost. But you stood there, Breathe three times, Whispered in your head, So it goes...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 7/2/2019 8:05:00 AM
I have the perfect ambiance to read this piece this morning. The rain is pouring and Lightning is striking Lake Okanagan outside my window.
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Vincent Salvosa
Date: 7/3/2019 7:04:00 AM
Hey there! Thank you so much for reading my poems and commenting! I very much appreciate it! :)
Date: 6/14/2019 5:53:00 AM
... I don't like such storms ... but we can't stop it - A great poem, Vincent - // Anne-Lise :)
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Vincent Salvosa
Date: 6/14/2019 6:21:00 AM
Thank you so much! :)
Date: 6/12/2019 7:18:00 PM
the first storm i remember was when a kid watching a hurricane...i've loved weather ever since...such a wonder : )
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Vincent Salvosa
Date: 6/12/2019 9:03:00 PM
I strated to love how the weather changes when I was twelve when I saw a purple lightning striking at the sky. Thanks for reading! :)
Date: 6/12/2019 4:55:00 AM
I love the power of breath don't you ? I love your little poem today, it enriches my soul, Have a great day dear Vincent.
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Vincent Salvosa
Date: 6/12/2019 4:59:00 AM
It just reminded of someone saying that things can change when you breathe. Thank you for reading this!
Date: 6/11/2019 11:09:00 PM
Optimistically sound and hope-filled! I like this very much, Vincent, my friend.
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Vincent Salvosa
Date: 6/12/2019 4:58:00 AM
Thank you for liking this! :)