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So I Cried

She finally did me in She could only take so much She told me that I was sin And couldn’t be with her as such And tears formed as I clutched I cried aloud as I’ve never done With severe pain, reaching areas unknown She tied me to things undone Leaving me completely broken And a heart that needs to be sewn Russell Sivey Entrant into Francine Roberts', "3 forms, 3 themes" contest 5/30/2012 A Broken Heart

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Date: 6/4/2012 1:15:00 PM
so strong yet so romantic poem,like it very much,Ivy
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Date: 5/30/2012 8:54:00 PM
EXCELLENT!! Russell...you captured it well...well done my dear friend...it does ease up...love ya, deb
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Date: 5/30/2012 5:44:00 PM
brilliant one mate ...if only i could write like you...
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