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So Alive!

The heartfelt music is ringing to the skies, I can feel the light eminating from my eyes! I'm lifted up from the hole i fell in, My Savior, Lord, Redeemer has saved me from sin! The heavenly joyous sounds, straining from above, Touching my heart like an angelic, pure, white dove. I never thought I could be this way, a beacon of pure light, Wanting to touch every dead spirit I meet, and bring them to life My mind has become sharper, the numbness gone away, Sound has become so vibrant, and I can hear myself say, The clouds have lifted up, Taken off of my eyes, Now I'm looking, smiling, up at the bright blue skies.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/27/2010 8:10:00 AM
I am enjoying it very much! There is so much to learn from all these other fantastic poets
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Date: 4/26/2010 3:35:00 PM
thanks for the advice Carol! :)
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Date: 4/26/2010 6:35:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Parker. If you would like to have more of your poetry read try to limit your postings to 3-5 poems per day. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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