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Snowflake

If I were a snowflake, I’d touch you softly Just enough to refresh you Tickle you to smile, pick up any tears, And make them pretty I would fall outside your window, Join others in a sparkling dance on the ground I would melt with a kiss on your lips Bring color to your cheek If I were a snowflake, I’d bring all the simplicity you need And last long enough for you to see stars of beauty Heidi Sands 2/12/20

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Date: 2/13/2020 10:33:00 AM
When your heart holds your pen, everything you write shines.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/13/2020 10:46:00 AM
That is so nice of you to say and encouraging too. Thank you for all your support :)
Date: 2/13/2020 2:46:00 AM
Nice one
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/13/2020 8:53:00 AM
Thank you Arturo. I hope you have a nice day :)
Date: 2/12/2020 3:58:00 PM
Words of beauty--just like the snowflake.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/12/2020 4:16:00 PM
Thank you Vijay. I always appreciate your kind comments :)
Date: 2/12/2020 2:37:00 PM
Sweet, thoughtful, CREATIVE, and a FAVE for me. Thanks!! Superb personification, Heidi! Best wishes, Gershon
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/12/2020 2:40:00 PM
Thank you so much Gershon! I am happy to hear that and thanks for the FAVE . :)

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