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Snowball War

Snowball War. Three flakes of snow fell on the village, there might have been a few more, but those I saw landed on the roof of the car and I saw them melt to droplets of clear water. On each droplets a tiny rainbow and my mother´s face when I called and asked for her to throw down a sandwich with marge and sugar on. She did, often- I´m not a football keeper- it landed in the snow which was more than tiny flakes; so what! Bread and sugar, I was hungry and fighting against children who had invading our street. And when my hands were frozen I came up warmed them by the stow and remember how it hurts to get the circulation back into my hands.

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Date: 12/5/2012 7:33:00 AM
Dear Jan each time I read this, Jan, I find another phrase to warm my psyche. It makes me think of Dylan Thomas' images in "a Child's Christmas in Wales" love, Kathy P.S. the frozen hands brought me back.
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 12/5/2012 3:48:00 PM
thank you kathy, Dylan was famous because he as university educated and live in a literary invironmentbut I don~t mind I´m happy as long as you and other read my poems

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