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tiny snow angel snowflakes kiss your rosy cheeks white winter beauty Any poem you ever wrote not for a contest Sponsored by Broken Wings 14th November 2014 Published in Haiku Journal #33 by Prolific Press

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P.M. Richter

Date: 2/14/2019 6:33:00 PM

Snow flakes are like angels ~ I love it! Beautiful haiku Jan :)

Jan Allison
Date: 2/14/2019 6:35:00 PM

thanks PM:-) hugs Jan xx

Valerie Staton

Date: 1/25/2019 8:37:00 AM

Very nicely written!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/14/2019 6:34:00 PM

thanks Valerie:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/14/2016 9:04:00 PM

An excellent write, Jan! Your words match the picture perfectly. Congrats on your win!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/9/2017 7:44:00 PM

Thanks so much Kim sorry I missed replying before!:-( hugs Jan xx

John Lawless

Date: 7/14/2016 5:17:00 PM

Great Haiku Jan. I used to make snow devils....

Jan Allison
Date: 7/14/2016 5:21:00 PM

ha ha ha John I love that comment:-) hugs Jan xx

Carol Eastman

Date: 7/14/2016 9:42:00 AM

I really LOVED that picture to go with it. Congratulations on the win.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/14/2016 5:20:00 PM

Thanks Carol I love the picture too:-) hugs jan xx

Janis Thompson

Date: 7/13/2016 2:12:00 PM

Congratulations, Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 7/13/2016 3:11:00 PM

Thanks Janis:-) hugs Jan xx

Funom Makama

Date: 11/24/2014 9:37:00 AM

Nice poem. Excellent share and you gave me an inspiring read. Thanks for blessing us with your creativity.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/24/2014 11:03:00 AM

Thanks so much Funom:-) hugs jan xx

S.D. Tiwari

Date: 11/23/2014 4:36:00 AM

Nice haiku, Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 11/23/2014 4:38:00 AM

thanks so much for the comment S D :-) Hugs jan xx

James Fraser

Date: 11/17/2014 5:09:00 PM

I find this piece, extremely romantic. It's the scene I'd like to be in, with someone so close. Love it Jan, dreamy Haiku, James :)

Jan Allison
Date: 11/17/2014 5:11:00 PM

Thank you so much James for your glowing comment:-) Hugs jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/17/2014 4:11:00 PM

I think all your poetry is brilliant. Your Haiku goes one step beyond that. Fav.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/17/2014 4:15:00 PM

Aww Maurice you are so so generous in your praise thank you:-) Hugs Jan xx

Matthew Anish

Date: 11/16/2014 7:31:00 PM

You stuck to the 5 7 5 form which is all to the good! I enjoyed your winter haiku! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Jan Allison
Date: 11/17/2014 1:01:00 AM

Thanks so much Matthew:-) Hugs Jan xx

Darlene Gifford

Date: 11/16/2014 8:16:00 AM

I can feel the cold kiss of snow on my cheeks. A delightful Haiku, Jan. A 7 and a sav for me. And thanks for visiting my poem this morning. Blessings, Darlene

Jan Allison
Date: 11/16/2014 8:56:00 AM

Thanks so much Darlene:-) Hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/15/2014 12:49:00 PM

- Lovely snow haiku Jan !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 11/15/2014 12:59:00 PM

Thanks so much Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan x

Adell Foster

Date: 11/15/2014 12:24:00 PM

I love the imagery of this piece, it brought back memories for this reader indeed. So much beauty expressed within this haiku. Thank you for sharing the read and for your lovely comments on "Welcome Back Child". God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell

Jan Allison
Date: 11/15/2014 12:37:00 PM

Thanks so much Adell:-) Hugs jan xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/15/2014 5:50:00 AM

A snowy day?...Enjoyed reading your creative work..Thanks for the visit..I would like chocolate in my chili I am sure but don't know about the rest of the family..Cinnamon just a dash adds to the flavor as well..Sara

Jan Allison
Date: 11/15/2014 6:32:00 AM

thanks for dropping by Sara - you cant actually taste the chocolate in the chilli - just gives it a dark richness to it:-) hugs Jan x

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 11/14/2014 11:40:00 PM

Winter personified-snow-white-great imagery..A fav XXXX Love Jan XXX RAJAT

Jan Allison
Date: 11/15/2014 3:21:00 AM

Thanks so much Rajat:-) Hugs Jan xx

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/14/2014 11:28:00 PM

Very lovely! Enjoyed your haiku Jan. I could almost see your tiny Angels in front of me while reading it. A 7 for me! :) love and light! xxx D.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/15/2014 3:20:00 AM

Thank you so much Dorian:-) Hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/14/2014 6:30:00 PM

Such a pretty picture you have brush stroked on my mind.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/14/2014 6:48:00 PM

Thank you so much for the lovely comment Richard:-) hugs Jan xx

Frederic Parker

Date: 11/14/2014 5:56:00 PM

You have captured the pretty side of winter with your Haiku..my homestate gets plenty of snow..the state I live in now they call sunshine state

Jan Allison
Date: 11/14/2014 6:09:00 PM

Thanks so much for the lovely comment Frederic:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 11/14/2014 4:49:00 PM

Lovely haiku, Jan. I can only imagine...we do not get snow in Malta. hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 11/14/2014 4:53:00 PM

Thankfully we rarely get it Paul - it is lovely on Christmas cards but the reality of the chaos it can cause was found in the Island in 2012 when in the North they had an unusual amount - drifts of up to 10 foot any many livestock sadly perished:-( Hugs jan xx

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/14/2014 3:59:00 PM

Im going to make my first snow angel with Christina in kent(Rochester or Canterbury)..Is there snow at the moment?How beautiful this is Favouring if.I just told a friend he should try get his haiku published.I believe this can make irt too. If you ll be interested the email is www.haikujournal.com or .org ..There is a site profilic press..you can get more info..Hugs..Tmfvs

Jan Allison
Date: 11/14/2014 4:02:00 PM

Thanks Chramaine I was thinking of posting some when you mentioned it before - maybe its time now:-) Hugs Jan No snow forecast for the next 2 weeks there as far as the long range forecast shows - sorry:-(

Tim Smith

Date: 11/14/2014 3:09:00 PM

Mine ran in off the school bus in shorts...snow, cold, kids and fashion....excellent Jan...hugs Tim

Tim Smith
Date: 11/14/2014 3:15:00 PM

No not in public schools

Jan Allison
Date: 11/14/2014 3:14:00 PM

LOL - kids eh - Don't they have school uniform in the schools then? Hugs Jan xx

David Meade

Date: 11/14/2014 2:49:00 PM

Yes, yes . . . I like this a lot . . . little children with bright red cheeks and squeals of delightful laughter -- snow everywhere . . . a warm happiness is this haiku. Nicely done

Jan Allison
Date: 11/14/2014 2:57:00 PM

Thanks David for the lovely comment:-) Hugs jan xx

Gary Bateman

Date: 11/14/2014 1:42:00 PM

Most Beautiful Jan!! The imagery is wondrous and most delightful. Best Always, Gary

Jan Allison
Date: 11/14/2014 1:45:00 PM

Thank you so much Gary:-) I have just commented on your poem! Hugs Jan xx