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The first words speaking outside the mind that I would safely say now Hello red hot sexy beautiful tiger Jewels dazzling your light a rainbow promise vision shines in those beautiful eyes radiating one warm golden treasure Deeply beauty blossoms out kissing softly opening petals to the heart entering Alladins cave you are dripping all treasures amazing beautiful

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 10/20/2014 2:16:00 AM

The honest words of love and passion that pour out of the heart are a very valuable treasure.... You have just done that here, my friend. Great work, Liam!

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/20/2014 3:10:00 AM

so sweet of you kelly smiling wonderful comment dear friend god bless

Gary Bateman

Date: 10/19/2014 2:05:00 PM

Liam . . . Do you have the magic location to Aladdin's Cave?? I'm looking for the Sexy Beautiful Tiger. Great Write here as always my Irish Mate. Here's sparkin' to ya' and wish'n ya' the best. (I think I'm starting to sound more and more like you my good friend??!!) Best Wishes, Gary

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/19/2014 2:33:00 PM

i was reading a story about a tiger in the jungle book earlier in the day to a few of my nephews and nieces only i was adding my own bits they all love me telling them stories so someone beautiful sprang to mind i finish the story get a pen and paper shared a moments thought wonderful comment thank you deeply gary dear friend smiling

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 10/19/2014 9:19:00 AM

really love your free verses.. beautiful Liam.. :)

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/19/2014 9:46:00 AM

so sweet your comment olive thank you ever so kindly deeply appreciated

Sandip Goswami

Date: 10/18/2014 3:28:00 PM

Lovely...I enjoyed your beautiful treasures...Long live with her...Best wishes with smile...

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/18/2014 3:47:00 PM

sandip wonderful heartfelt comment passing you an irish blessing

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/17/2014 5:42:00 PM

truly graced with poetic diction,liam.. so enticing!.. huggs

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/17/2014 5:48:00 PM

nette dear friend thank you for the very beautiful comment bless you

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/17/2014 9:19:00 AM

- Yes, beautiful is the word !!! - Thank you, Liam - Happy weekend :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/17/2014 9:33:00 AM

anne lise enjoy your weekend dear friend always warm beautiful your comments heartfelt appreciated

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 10/17/2014 6:35:00 AM

softly opening petals to the heart entering Alladins cave you are dripping all treasures amazing beautiful extremely beautiful lines. So sensual. Highly commendable imagery. love from rajat

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/17/2014 6:41:00 AM

thank you rajat heart touching warm beautiful comment dear friend bless you