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Slumber

Upon the golden sun filled beach waves gently caress the shore lulling us into a peaceful trance listening to the rolling rhythm in one endless uniform beat peace invades the soul calmness enters slowly we begin to relax under slow repetitive sounds eventually slumber zzzzzzzzzz

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Eve Roper

Date: 11/8/2017 4:04:00 PM

Congratulations, Phyllis, being featured on the home page, nicely done I am ready for a nice nap :) ... ... hugs eve ~`*

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/5/2017 3:01:00 AM

Your poem just made up my mind for me to quit reading and get some peaceful sleep before I get my second wind and I will be up all night. A lovely serene piece Phyl! ; )

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 9/17/2017 4:46:00 PM

Thanks Connie for your comment. Fall is in the air here in Saskatchewan. Seems summer went fast and I did not do much but sit on the deck. Getting better but still have trouble to bend over and pick up things. Take care. love phyl

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/28/2017 2:44:00 PM

so relaxing i find myself feeling dreamy with this beautiful piece, dear phyl !... huggs and thanks for your comments.

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 9/17/2017 4:43:00 PM

Thanks Net. Nice to see your name. Hope all is well with you. love phyl

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/28/2017 2:44:00 PM

so relaxing i find myself feeling dreamy with this beautiful piece, dear phyl !... huggs and thanks for your comments.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/28/2017 1:36:00 PM

Oh Phyllis this is a joy to read I love the soothing sound of the sea but quite often around our shores it is stormy and it is far from serene and calming:-) hugs jan xx

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 9/17/2017 4:43:00 PM

Thanks Jan live so far from the sea that have not seen a very stormy one. Hope all is well with you. Recovery is coming along good. Still have a bit of trouble bending but that will take time. love phyl