Sleep Walking In the Snow

Last night I was sleep walking in the snow
I dreamed about my cheating spouse Beau
            And I fell and hit my head
             Folk thought I was dead
When I woke I looked for something to throw





2-16-18

Contest: As  I Was Walking In The Snow
Sponsor:Kevin Shaw
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 5/15/2018 8:11:00 AM
I see this is a winner. Congrats, a very enjoyable read.
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Date: 3/3/2018 2:57:00 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/3/2018 7:30:00 AM
Enjoyed this, Alexis, thanks for the chuckle. Congrats on your win. John
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Date: 3/3/2018 7:24:00 AM
And you pummeled Beau??? Congratulations to you xxoo
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Date: 3/3/2018 1:04:00 AM
Congratulations Alexis. Tom
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Date: 3/2/2018 8:05:00 PM
hahaha.. this is so funny... Congratulations on your win ! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 3/2/2018 8:05:00 PM
Jubilations and celebrations... brr, the cold, freezing sensations... sleepwalking in the snow... that's such a big no-no! You're a winner, congratulations... Mick
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Date: 3/2/2018 7:10:00 PM
That's a pretty eventful walk in the snow! LOL Congrats on your win, Alexis. Well done.
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Date: 2/26/2018 12:58:00 PM
This so cool, funny-o, Alexis! Had me laughing nonstop. The last line is just priceless. You excel at writing limericks. Another fave classic from your talented pen. Love and joy always.
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Date: 2/22/2018 7:43:00 PM
Alexis, this is really funny !
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Date: 2/20/2018 1:03:00 PM
I love it! So adorable, Alexis. I wish I had a head or knack rather for limericks, but a woman's gotta know her limitations. Thanks for an enjoyable chuckle! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 2/19/2018 11:58:00 AM
HA! You could just make a snowball and throw THAT. This is cute!
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Date: 2/19/2018 4:54:00 AM
HILARIOUS! Excellent Limerick dearest, Alexis. Hope you are placed on the top! Much enjoyed!
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Date: 2/18/2018 11:03:00 PM
Now this made me smile!!! :)
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Date: 2/18/2018 10:53:00 AM
This is a fun one. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 2/17/2018 10:16:00 PM
A witty and fun limerick Alexis. So well expressed. I would throw a party for getting rid of him!! :)) A great poem. Best wishes for a win. ~Susan
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Date: 2/17/2018 6:16:00 PM
This fun and witty poem brought a smile to my face Alexis; Good luck in the contest!~Che :) PS I think I would throw a fit, lol! (Although snowballs would definitely help!) :)
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Date: 2/17/2018 4:36:00 PM
Alexis, thank you for bringing a smile to my face! What a very witty limerick you have penned! I still have not tried this form - just can't put one together :-) lol. Best regards and hugs.Pandita
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Date: 2/17/2018 1:54:00 PM
A fun read, Alexis!
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Date: 2/17/2018 12:47:00 PM
Perhaps a rock to throw at your cheating beau, snow would be too soft lol. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 2/17/2018 12:47:00 PM
Ouch... I would throw... him out! :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/17/2018 11:11:00 AM
- A great limerick, Alexis - Sleep walking in the snow sounds scary and dangerous - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/17/2018 11:11:00 AM
Maybe throw a snowball? Great limerick Alexis..
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