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Sleep Deprvivation

I was a young mother, exhausted, I was going to lie down for a second. As my eyes closed, I saw an old Ford coming down an alley. My heart began beating erratically; terror entered my soul. They are going to kill me! An internal voice screamed. I looked down and saw a dress and shoes from the thirties. I knew I was in Chicago; I was a gangster’s girlfriend. And his gang was after me. I felt them chase me down in an alley. I was trapped. One of them threw me down and began to cut my throat. His wide grinning face was the last thing I saw. Death was a relief. Sleep deprivation is a real thing now for me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 10/17/2021 2:52:00 AM
Thrilling and wow what a nightmare.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/17/2021 3:55:00 AM
It sure was - this was in 1981 and I have never forgotten it.
Date: 10/13/2021 10:05:00 AM
oh gee, Caren, if that's the kind of nightmare you have when sleeping, I wouldn't mind sleep deprivation, or at least someone to wake me when I start yelling. I love the photos you have on your home page, especially the one of you climbing out of your playpen!!!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/14/2021 7:25:00 AM
Thank you very much Jenna. I may have to look at those photos now.
Date: 10/13/2021 9:04:00 AM
Sleep deprivation is not a thing to take lightly because it fosters some interesting illusions, I think...and maybe reveals some things about ourselves we wouldn't otherwise consider.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/14/2021 7:25:00 AM
I know what I felt, and it felt REAL.

Book: Shattered Sighs