Sky

looking skyward colors of a pallet soak a vast horizon a fire of blinded eyes stare in a fixed moment a calm of a blue tomorrow awaits a distant hope a love of a dreaming fool dances free....... _______________________ Inspired by Jim David and his poem "Cinders"

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/9/2010 10:48:00 AM

Congratulations Rick on your win in Tavarus Moreland's contest "Is She The One". Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/3/2010 1:57:00 PM

Congrats Rick my friend on your HM in Tavarus's contest... Is She the One.. awesome write..wonderful win.. enjoy your honor so special..with luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/7/2010 11:42:00 AM

Very descriptive and expressive write that you have penned in this one..I read Jim's poem also and found it to be one I enjoyed reading..I am feeling some better right now...Thanks for asking...Have a great afternoon..I appreciate you taking time to read and comment on my work..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/6/2010 8:55:00 PM

A wonderful write Rick.. enjoyed.. I just posted a new blog with vacation photos from Hawaii and a few from the Jersey seashore.. these are a few of hundreds ..they all will be posted in groups ... a few days apart till all are viewed.. it u want a little taste of island magic.. enjoy.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"... AlohA...

Jim David

Date: 7/6/2010 7:52:00 PM

read this one http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=237193

Jim David

Date: 7/6/2010 7:51:00 PM

very damn good, Mr.......

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/6/2010 7:22:00 PM

Beautifully penned, Rick. Great imagery and the last line says so much! Love, Carolyn