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Sitting On a Wall

Sitting on a wall, his special gift The winds of change began to shift He asked her to join him for a walk To enjoy the day and have a talk Earlier that day she had been miffed What could he do to remove the rift He desired to give her heart a lift There his diamond ring placed on a rock Sitting on a wall Her reaction was happy and swift With unbridled passion he was kissed Happily received a heart in shock He gently removes her flowing smock With loves key he opens up her lock Sitting on a wall

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Caleah Buil

Date: 5/24/2013 2:46:00 PM

Aww, I loved this! I'm a total romantic at heart, and this really touched me. So cute!!! I can just imagine the girls face. :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/24/2013 5:34:00 PM

Thanks for your visits today.

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/23/2013 4:40:00 PM

Well I can't sing for sure... but I have made some piano songs if you are interesting... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QPiDZSi0Wf0

Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/23/2013 4:41:00 PM

Interested*... I type too fast and make spelling mistakes... lol.

Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/23/2013 4:40:00 PM

I think I was 15 in this video... need to make another youtube account so I can post more...

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/23/2013 4:34:00 PM

I thought you'd enjoy it :) I randomly stumbled upon it when I was looking up a video that me and my friend did... I typed in Tim Hicks and this random country song popped up...

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/23/2013 4:35:00 PM

I thought maybe you had some hidden musical talent.

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/23/2013 4:14:00 PM

No the artist wasn't me (quite ironically his name is just Tim Hicks). The song is called Stronger Beer by Tim Hicks... should be able to work on youtube... if not then I'm not sure what to say *shrugs*

Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/23/2013 4:38:00 PM

Don't loose them nuts... LOL!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/23/2013 4:25:00 PM

Stronger beer and bigger balls! Very often they are bluer because it is also colder here. As a tribute to our blue balls they came out with Labbats Blue! Thanks for directing me to the video, it was a lot of fun.

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/23/2013 3:21:00 PM

soup mail

Manel Gunatillake

Date: 5/23/2013 6:19:00 AM

Rondeau is a beautiful style. but must be hard to keep strictly to two rhymes through out. Very nice poem. I like your choice in last two lines. "He gently removes her flowing smock With loves key he opens up her lock" Bless you!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/23/2013 6:20:00 AM

I found this form very challenging because of the rhyme theme. I should have chose words that had more rhyming options.

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/22/2013 11:40:00 PM

This is cool and different... there was something very introspective about the repeated phrase... left it really open.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/23/2013 6:22:00 AM

Thanks Tim, it was a hard one for me but I do enjoy a challenge

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/22/2013 2:31:00 PM

oh, with love keys!! a cute and clever poem!!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/23/2013 6:23:00 AM

;0) thanks.