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Sipping Cider With My Sweetheart

Sipping Cider with my Sweetheart Winter changes things. Stirs the imagination as she walks into the café bundled in a long coat sealed with a scarf and hat. A tempting hint of pursed lips shuddering under blinking eyes, a deep exhale allowing the warmth of this coffee fueled haven to loosen her scarf. Her lips, - blanched by Winter’s kiss poutily moistened with anticipation, a thawed tear of relief dampening her cheek, eyes adjusting to the heat of steaming coffee and raucous chatter. Beauty - captured in a face freed by the folly of Winter’s wanton winds. ©11/19/2018 contest – COOL WRITES AND IMAGINATIION – Poetry Contest sponsor – Kim Rodrigues

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Date: 11/29/2018 7:57:00 PM
Lips blanched by winter kiss..loved the line..warmth of love when winter is your lover
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Date: 11/19/2018 10:50:00 PM
A moral delivered in an intriguing poem from a creative imagination. All that. I enjoyed your take on the contest. All the best ... CayCay
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John Lawless
Date: 11/28/2018 2:08:00 PM
Thanks CayCay, glad you like it.
Date: 11/19/2018 4:05:00 PM
ohh, the beauty of this work lies in its descriptive language and remarkable closing, john...well done! huggs
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John Lawless
Date: 11/19/2018 9:16:00 PM
Oh, Nette, you're making me blush...thanks for stopping to read and comment
Date: 11/19/2018 10:54:00 AM
Great rendition for entry, John...ready for a win...love & light...^WW^
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John Lawless
Date: 11/19/2018 9:16:00 PM
Hey WW, thanks for the visit and support

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