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Sipping Cider With My Sweetheart

Imagine my surprise when After a long day’s work I’m ready to turn in And I’m stopped dead in my tracks Sitting up under the covers Waiting for me Is Santa Claus!! I only recognize him ‘Cause he's wearing his hat Truth be told He looks an awful lot Like my sweetheart With his white beard So thinking quick on my feet I make him promise Not to move an inch As I run out to grab Cold cider in two glasses This is the most memorable Romantic visit I’d ever had AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on November 17, 2018 for contest COOL WRITES & IMAGINATION sponsored by KIM RODRIGUES

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Date: 11/19/2018 10:44:00 PM
Santa, romantic or not, would be a memorable visit, yes? I wonder did her have a big bag with him? Just kidding. Your poem is cute and delightfully entertaining. All the best ... CayCay
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Date: 11/19/2018 10:57:00 PM
Thanks for your delightful visit and comment, CayCay.
Date: 11/18/2018 3:23:00 AM
Lovely verse Line, can just picture the scene. Good luck. Tom.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/18/2018 9:24:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Tom.
Date: 11/18/2018 12:00:00 AM
lovely penned /// feel untouched love here
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/18/2018 12:08:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Mahtab.
Date: 11/17/2018 11:12:00 PM
Beautifully penned, memorable moment; well done.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/17/2018 11:53:00 PM
Thank you for your most appreciated visit and compliment, ML.
Date: 11/17/2018 11:06:00 PM
A sweet write, Line. Very tender indeed, sounds true to me.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/17/2018 11:51:00 PM
Absolutely happened, Caren - my husband so surprised me. It was SO adorable!
Date: 11/17/2018 10:52:00 PM
:) a great santa
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/17/2018 11:52:00 PM
Indeed - the best, Eve!

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