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Please, my heart begs you stifle each false thought. I see wounding words growing in your eyes. Spoken, such intent shapes love more distraught Than this swelled tussle we now realize. Best we speak core truth, lest we spin crosswise. I urge healing sincerity from you, Not jabs to maim me thoroughly dark blue. Let your heart tenderly engage with mine That our fine love will strengthen us straight through Where hearts entwine in love tighter aligned.
... CayCay Jennings September 9, 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Date: 9/17/2016 5:54:00 PM
This is so wonderful, CayCay....I'm so pleased to see that it placed high! The form not as easy as one first imagines, but you make it work perfectly, with so much heart. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/13/2016 10:18:00 AM
Your Dizain poem was awesome, creative and unique..Congratulations on your placement..Sara
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Date: 9/12/2016 7:54:00 AM
Powerful words. Thanks for sharing. Congrats
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Date: 9/11/2016 1:18:00 PM
Beautiful dizain! Congratulations.
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Date: 9/11/2016 12:07:00 PM
Beautiful CayCay, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/11/2016 10:35:00 AM
Love the title, love the poem ... I mean that most sincerely CayCay:-) many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/11/2016 9:39:00 AM
This really is masterfully done. Very lovely and powerful. Kudos and congrats!
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Date: 9/11/2016 9:27:00 AM
CayCay! when I saw you on the winners list I was not surprised lovely lady :) It's like you knew exactly what I would love to read in a dizain, loved it :) congratulations on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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Date: 9/10/2016 11:12:00 PM
Your poem is an intelligent lovely little masterpiece CayCay! When harsh words are hurled they make mental wounds that take much longer to heal than physical ones do. This poem left me in awe of your talent! I really hope this does well! ; ) 7
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Date: 9/10/2016 12:05:00 PM
CayCay, wonderfully penned, it really made me think, that if people would just talk things out instead of throwing insults and hurtful words, well done ~
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Date: 9/9/2016 10:51:00 AM
This reader can certainly feel the angst in your words, CayCay. Insecurity always leads to chaos. Good luck in contest.
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