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Silent Vale

Relentless the rain it falls pity upon my cheek this dreary day in silence I sit a fragile memory my beloved fortress has gone away upon the weary ravaged vale of distant dreams where love has failed I sit alone a silent yearnings in shades of grey I cry for you alone my breathe................. a heartbeat shallow................. the fallen leaves have all but vanished relentless the rain it falls pity upon the weary ravaged vale.................. ________________________ A Slow And Methodical Song. Contest "Silence"

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Date: 1/6/2011 10:51:00 AM
Many congratulations Rick, on your win in Paula's contest >> James
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Date: 1/5/2011 9:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your win ^Rick in the "Breathe in the silence" contest by Paula Swanson. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/3/2011 3:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 1/2/2011 8:06:00 PM
An amazing write rick. Many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 1/2/2011 4:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your big win in the contest, Rick! A beautiful, well written poem. Always, Audrey
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Date: 1/2/2011 6:00:00 AM
Congratulations ^Rick on your well deserved win!
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Date: 1/2/2011 5:16:00 AM
Beautiful write of love loss Rick and the silence that accompanies it. Congrats on your win my friend... Lay
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Date: 1/2/2011 2:29:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved third place win in the contest of Paula, Rick
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Date: 1/1/2011 9:33:00 PM
An introspective, contemplative write, Michael. Well done! Congratulations on your win. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/1/2011 8:33:00 PM
Well done. I felt the solitariness of this. Congratulations on your third place. Love, J
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Date: 1/1/2011 8:22:00 PM
I love the form you used for your winner..congrats. BG
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Date: 1/1/2011 8:11:00 PM
Congrats Rick on your third place win in the Silence contest with this incredible entry my friend.. enjoy with luv this first day of 2011..
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Date: 12/29/2010 9:13:00 AM
A few words to let you know I have read your poetry today and enjoyed it Rick. I hope to read many more of your poems in 2011. Wishing you a New Year filled with good health , love, and amazing inspiration. May your writing endeavors become all that you have wished for. HAPPY NEW YEAR. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/29/2010 7:21:00 AM
I get really sad vives from this silence.Very expresssive and descriptive of a love loss time in one's life.Good luck in the contest.Reads like a winner to me.I have heard that it rains very much in the Oregon and Washington State area.Thanks for visiting my blog and the encouraging words.We have not way to communicate with our children this day for the cells phones that we have do not work at the VA in Atlanta.I guess they could use a pay phone so if I don't hear and will think all is well.Sara
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Date: 12/28/2010 7:15:00 PM
Awesome Rick.. a precious and powerful piece my friend.. good luck .. tried to congratulate u on your win in Just Poetry but this system is super slow tonight and keeps knocking me off when trying to comment..so congrats on this piece luv... and Happy New Year too..
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