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Silent, the Castle Doors

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Stillness held the flower, in distant gazes spilling from their palms.... A cats meow, resounding atop timeless rafters; peering at the stage About a sixteenth century romance; dramatica, close the castle door Hush the crowd betwixt breath they keep; frozen in this their heart As Juliet lifts her tearful blade and Romeo's love, now fast asleep; dreams Not weep as time does part to gather once more; aneath these stars.... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ...."Silent, the Castle Doors" *

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/11/2012 12:02:00 PM
the tearful blade... is somehow dark and scary..yet the gathering of Romeo and Juliet aneath the stars.. bring a hopeful feeling for a terrible tragedy.
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Date: 4/10/2012 8:17:00 PM
How wonderful,John...I adore this!! very soft and tender read...thank you for sharing...big huggss,love deb
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Date: 4/10/2012 4:36:00 PM
Mesmerizing as usual... I always read your writes over and over. Keep it up, dear Netteski! ~N
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