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Silenced

The night is swept with sorrow Like a broom against the grain Dusty air and smokey puffs And laced to pace the vein Burn the inner motion Halt the raging sea- Breathe in the sinner's guilt And pain cast over me I've heard the cello drone I can see the midnight's womb I can feel the heavy air Drifting past the summer's tomb I have felt the golden light And known the burdened heart- I have lived by broken promise Returned by pained depart I've been given nurture's role To repair the wound's alone Waiting for our mother, Time Without a mother's drone The night is cold and dead Smoke released with guidance List'ning for the sound of love And for once, the sound of silence

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/20/2015 9:06:00 AM
Wow! This is without a doubt a 7. I am so voracious for more of your lines right now and I definitely will come by to enjoy the bliss of your words.
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Date: 1/4/2014 7:39:00 AM
What a talent you are well done. Pete.
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Date: 12/9/2013 12:35:00 PM
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Date: 11/7/2013 9:28:00 AM
what a thrill to read this splendid, flowing piece... rich in content and masterfully written, dana... wow!..:) huggs
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Date: 11/5/2013 6:25:00 AM
Quite a lyrical write on lost love and depression, Dana
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Date: 11/5/2013 6:23:00 AM
This is a phenomenal and spectacular write my friend! I surely enjoyed reading this enlightening poem this morning! You have delighted me by the splendor of this incredible piece Dana'Lynn! What a fantastic poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 11/5/2013 1:51:00 AM
Good choice of words and rhyming here.
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