Shift

Is this it? The end of us? Is our love saga over? I have loved you totally. With everything that I am. But last night I felt a shift You didn't hold me the same, Nor did you look at me the same. Last night I felt you slip away. I knew me and you were over We had shared our last dance, and our last and final kiss. …….. Good bye. A. Young 11-28-18

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Chris Green

Date: 11/29/2018 12:15:00 PM

Very sad my friend, I hope this is just a poem because the others you have posted recently were so filled with love and joy.

Alexis Y.
Date: 11/29/2018 12:22:00 PM

Hi Chris, It is just a poem. The inspiration came from Silent One's most recent poetry conest. Thanks for stopping by, I appreciate your continued support:-) Alexis

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/29/2018 8:55:00 AM

Truly expressed Alexis. A sad situation people can relate to. Well done :)

Alexis Y.
Date: 11/29/2018 12:31:00 PM

Hi Heidi, I appreciate your positive comments and visits. I'm happy that you stopped by:-) Alexis

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/29/2018 6:07:00 AM

It sure reads like the final goodbye. So much said in just a few words. Well done, Alexis.

Alexis Y.
Date: 11/29/2018 12:28:00 PM

Hi Vijay, I appreciate your comment and visit. I am thankful of your continued support:-) Alexis

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/29/2018 1:58:00 AM

Sadly some relationships end that way Alexis. Hope you're well. Tom.

Tom Cunningham
Date: 11/29/2018 1:28:00 PM

Im fine thanks.

Alexis Y.
Date: 11/29/2018 12:24:00 PM

Hi Tom, I am well. How are you? The poem was inspired by Silent One's most recent contest. I appreciate your continued support:-) Alexis

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/28/2018 10:55:00 PM

I hope this is just a poem, we have felt that shift at some point I think, and is a terrible feeling! Well expressed.

Alexis Y.
Date: 11/29/2018 12:26:00 PM

Hi Arthur, It is just a poem however many can relate to it. It was inspired by a contest. I appreciate that you stopped by:-) Alexis