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She's Gone

Where do I go from here The road ahead looks cold and bare There’s nothing left to hold on to when all I've ever had was the love that we both knew Where do I go from here A wanderer to who knows where Only an empty self-remains A man despair has changed Wherever you are, my dear please tell me... Where do I go from here…

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Date: 4/16/2018 2:44:00 PM
Hello Micheal, no one knows where we go from here. We can only guess. have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/17/2018 9:01:00 AM
Thank you Michael,you made my day.
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Arturo Michael
Date: 4/16/2018 2:46:00 PM
Lovely to see you Darlene...A Spring girl you are...
Date: 4/8/2018 9:19:00 AM
such a heart breaking piece Arturo. Your lines have a lyrical feel, i'd love to see the piece extended:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/6/2018 3:19:00 AM
Beautifully said...when you find it, let me know, I'll follow you..
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Date: 4/4/2018 7:44:00 PM
Hi, Arturo. I am running behind schedule on comments, etc here this week, but I wanted you to know I am grateful you read my poem today and I hope you are having a wonderful week
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Arturo Michael
Date: 4/5/2018 5:18:00 AM
I read you perfectly well...I haven't had an opportunity to settle my self and write...Thanks for passing by...Success Andrea... All the best...
Date: 4/3/2018 4:08:00 PM
Such a touching write Arturo, well expressed ;)
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Arturo Michael
Date: 4/5/2018 5:19:00 AM
Glad you liked it...All the best Wilma...
Date: 3/30/2018 7:55:00 AM
Very well expressed Arturo. I am sure many can relate to this. The reader can feel it deeply. Wishing for you the best. Have a nice day. :)
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Date: 3/29/2018 7:27:00 AM
Home :) go home :)
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Date: 3/26/2018 4:16:00 PM
wonderful verse, Arturo, enjoyed reading your creation Hugs Eve
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Arturo Michael
Date: 3/26/2018 6:43:00 PM
Eve...Nice to see you...Thank you...All the best of best to you...
Date: 3/26/2018 1:23:00 PM
Wow! Your expression heartache is felt in your write. Thankyou so much for sharing. H
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Arturo Michael
Date: 3/26/2018 6:41:00 PM
Thank you Mockingbird... It's one of those uncensored...now for now... no time to lie...Thanks for passing by...All the best to you...
Date: 3/26/2018 11:52:00 AM
A poignant but creative poem, Arturo. My compliments!
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Arturo Michael
Date: 3/26/2018 6:38:00 PM
Thank you, Ralph...Haven't seen you for a while...All the best my friend
Date: 3/26/2018 2:21:00 AM
So sad and heartfelt write. Written with painful heart. Excellent write. Thanks for sharing it.
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Arturo Michael
Date: 3/26/2018 3:39:00 AM
Good day Ravi...Thank you for stopping by...All the best to you
Date: 3/25/2018 7:00:00 PM
Awe that is sad... one can only stay strong! Nice one Arturo... hugs :)
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Arturo Michael
Date: 3/26/2018 3:38:00 AM
Always lovely to see you Akkina...Thank you...All the best to you...
Date: 3/25/2018 8:50:00 AM
so nice poetic expression of sadness. Excellent work. Good luck sir.
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Arturo Michael
Date: 3/26/2018 3:37:00 AM
Thank you Sanjay...All the best to you...
Date: 3/25/2018 8:16:00 AM
You made me feel the longing. Well expressed Arturo.
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Arturo Michael
Date: 3/26/2018 3:37:00 AM
Thank you Richard...All the best my friend...
Date: 3/25/2018 7:51:00 AM
Very sad and melancholy poem, Arturo. You express in this poem what many people are going thru. Hopefully, this will provide a ray of sunshine self-reflection introspection to banish the dark thoughts. Mighty fine poetry. Love and joy always.
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Arturo Michael
Date: 3/26/2018 3:36:00 AM
Good morning Freddie...Thanks, my friend...all the best
Date: 3/24/2018 10:28:00 AM
So sad and so heartfelt. I love how you wrote your heart's pain here.
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Arturo Michael
Date: 3/26/2018 3:34:00 AM
Nice to see you, Andrea...Thanks and all the best...
Date: 3/22/2018 8:01:00 PM
You go straight to the SoupBowl and write some more lol...Hi, Arturo...nice little piece and musical drama my friend...stay in the light...^WW^
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Arturo Michael
Date: 3/23/2018 5:21:00 AM
You know you may be right...just write...Thank you WW...All the best
Date: 3/22/2018 9:15:00 AM
Oh my. Hurts the heart... Beautifully written angst. Emotions so raw. Well done. If this is for real, I hope you find creating pieces like this very therapeutic.
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Arturo Michael
Date: 3/23/2018 5:20:00 AM
Completely correct, therapeutic...All the best Susan...Thanks for passing by...
Date: 3/21/2018 8:49:00 AM
One of my favorite songs from my favorite musical and very fitting to your sad poem. You are certainly developing your own style. Great write - Loved it. Maria
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Arturo Michael
Date: 3/23/2018 5:17:00 AM
Bonjour Maria...It's probably afternoon down under...Lovely to see you... All the best
Date: 3/20/2018 7:49:00 PM
Wow! Mon ami Arturo,beautifully forlorn imagery haunts the poetic lines of your poignant poem that weeps of loss and despair. Expressive heartache.. Superb! Warmest wishes dear friend! ~Susan
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Arturo Michael
Date: 3/21/2018 5:50:00 AM
You can run but you can't hide from these feelings...It just came out...When I believe there's not left for me to write about...pop goes the weasel...Thanks, Susan...looking forward to reading you again...All the best my friend... A little sugar for you today...
Date: 3/20/2018 7:33:00 PM
A very poignant intriguing write Arturo…very heartfelt!~Che :)
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Arturo Michael
Date: 3/21/2018 5:40:00 AM
Thank you Cheryl... Have a nice day...
Date: 3/20/2018 5:53:00 PM
Very sad poem it seems as if u was in a relationship or some sort and it didn't work out. I also like the video it's very much of the movies and plays that I like they carry action, love, passion and all.phantom of the Opera my fav.
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Arturo Michael
Date: 3/20/2018 7:03:00 PM
Nagella, my friend... Never met you...regardless, you are my friend...the magic of the word...you know, there must be different characters and what must play out...sometimes we can't avoid the worse... We strive ...to continue...because love we've never lost...
Date: 3/20/2018 4:04:00 PM
Sad poem Arturo...
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Date: 3/20/2018 3:19:00 PM
- If you love her ... ask for a second chance - A sensitive writing, Arturo - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Arturo Michael
Date: 3/20/2018 3:25:00 PM
Not a chance with the girls I know...Slip slide splash...great people though...Thanks Anne-Lise
Date: 3/20/2018 2:43:00 PM
Very expressive poem Arturo..I feel the passion and pain..well written, friend.
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Arturo Michael
Date: 3/20/2018 3:23:00 PM
Como Estas Vijay? Thank you my friend...A lot of feelings...
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