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She Said, He Said

She said " What can I do...I am only one?" He said " There's more to life then just having fun." She said " There's too much to do!" He said " That may be true." You may feel like a grain of sand... left alone in a desolate land... but if you can just understand... the effect that just one simple grain can have. She said " The world's gotten so bad it makes me blue." He said " See what a grain of sand in ones eye can do." She said " That might be true." He said "Or pass out a kind word or two." You may feel like a grain of sand... left alone in a desolate land... but if you can understand... the effect that just one simple grain can have. He said " We each have a choice to make... as to what ever course we take." She said " The more grains of sand who join in... will cause a new beach to begin." You may feel like a grain of sand... left alone in a desolate land... but if you can understand... the effect that just one simple grain can have. P.R.Deremer

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Date: 9/19/2017 7:47:00 PM
I say "We'll done!"
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Date: 8/26/2015 2:32:00 PM
I agree with Eileen on the 'join in.. will cause a new beach to begin' super piece and well constructed, well done, warm regards, Laura
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Pam Deremer
Date: 8/26/2015 2:36:00 PM
Thank you very much!
Date: 8/26/2015 2:12:00 PM
What a lovely uplifting piece this is. Yes, to join and create a new beach...Beautiful thought.
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Pam Deremer
Date: 8/26/2015 2:30:00 PM
Thank you for your very nice comment.

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