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She Left Me

I can't believe...how hard I've tried 
How far, I've come...to be denied 
One hundred miles, I rode that train 
Upon those tracks, in pouring rain 
I could not cork my tears; I cried 



Five Word Challenge 
Sponsor: Beth Evans 
11/25/2019

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Date: 12/8/2019 8:26:00 AM
Congrats on your winning poem Charles
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Date: 12/8/2019 4:44:00 AM
Excellent read, fits the prompt perfectly. Congrats.
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Date: 12/8/2019 3:46:00 AM
Great poem, Charlie, thanks for your entry.
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Date: 11/28/2019 2:10:00 PM
A painful one... Someday you'll uncork a bottle of champagne with a more appreciative gal! :) gw
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Date: 11/25/2019 10:38:00 AM
That's painful. A perfect rise to the challenge :)
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Date: 11/25/2019 9:02:00 AM
Loved this one. So very sad however... Ann
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Date: 11/25/2019 8:46:00 AM
Wow, perfect flow. Poignant. You certainly rose to the challenge of this difficult challenged. Great job, Charles.
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Date: 11/25/2019 7:33:00 AM
Great one! Well written and expressed. Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 11/25/2019 7:53:00 AM
Hi Heidi, Thank you so much for the luck and for your visit :) Hugs Charlie