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She Left Me

I can't believe...how hard I've tried How far, I've come...to be denied One hundred miles, I rode that train Upon those tracks, in pouring rain I could not cork my tears; I cried Five Word Challenge Sponsor: Beth Evans 11/25/2019

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Na Na

Date: 12/8/2019 8:26:00 AM

Congrats on your winning poem Charles

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 12/8/2019 4:44:00 AM

Excellent read, fits the prompt perfectly. Congrats.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/28/2019 2:10:00 PM

A painful one... Someday you'll uncork a bottle of champagne with a more appreciative gal! :) gw

Midnight Aurora

Date: 11/25/2019 10:38:00 AM

That's painful. A perfect rise to the challenge :)

Ann Foster

Date: 11/25/2019 9:02:00 AM

Loved this one. So very sad however... Ann

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/25/2019 8:46:00 AM

Wow, perfect flow. Poignant. You certainly rose to the challenge of this difficult challenged. Great job, Charles.

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/25/2019 7:33:00 AM

Great one! Well written and expressed. Good luck in the contest :)

Charles Messina
Date: 11/25/2019 7:53:00 AM

Hi Heidi, Thank you so much for the luck and for your visit :) Hugs Charlie