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She Can'T Even Write, Forever Goodbye

I'm asking myself this question all the time Why do people even fall in love? Do they need it or just want to try? Why do some people start pretending they're in love? Why do some people fall for some one who's far away? Some one who doesn't even care She starts bleeding love But that guy doesn't even see a single bleeding tear on the ground But she still wants him with all of her heart She screams his name at nights Even though she knows the truth That he's NOT listening, Just like every time But, She's lost her heart Given up all she had for a guy She would do ANYTHING to have him by her side While he doesn't even WANT her by HIS side Is it LOVE ?! 'Cause she'll die And he won't even know how hard she tried To make destiny, make him love her by his heart So she wants to write "Forever GoOdbye" On her heart But suddenly she sees and realizes That there's NO HEART

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Date: 5/28/2011 7:36:00 PM
I liked the theme and the simple rendering. Thanks for bringing out the agony of such a relationship which is not uncommon. Luv, jagath
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Arina Yaqubi
Date: 5/30/2011 8:59:00 AM
Oh, thank you!!! :)
Date: 5/24/2011 4:38:00 PM
That's excellent! Keep on creating!
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Arina Yaqubi
Date: 5/25/2011 12:02:00 AM
Thank youuu....!!! :)
Date: 5/24/2011 4:21:00 AM
ongratulations on your poem being featured this week, Arina
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Date: 5/23/2011 4:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Arina. Love, Carol
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Arina Yaqubi
Date: 5/23/2011 6:10:00 AM
Thank you so much...!!! xoXO
Date: 5/22/2011 8:13:00 PM
Congrats Arina on your featured poem this week on P.S. a great one to share with us all with luv..
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Arina Yaqubi
Date: 5/23/2011 6:11:00 AM
Thanx...A lot...!!! :)
Date: 5/6/2011 5:05:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Arina. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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