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Sharing a Snack

Jane made a grilled cheese It is her favourite sandwhich This is for her lunch Her dog Brandy cheese So joined her at the table Jane had no choice She decided to share her lunch "Brandy one piece for you" "Two pieces for me three for you" "Two for me half for me" "Half for you and half for me" Now I am hungry I will have grilled cheese

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Nancy Kaufman

Date: 10/8/2021 12:50:00 PM

that's so cute. It sounds like a two or a three year old child I think?? Kids are so adorable at that age.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/8/2021 5:36:00 PM

Hello Nancy no iris a person feeding their grilled cheese sandwich with her dog. She more grilled cheese to the dog , then made another for herself. Hugs.

Pratap Roy

Date: 10/6/2021 10:11:00 PM

Nicely written. Enjoyed the read. God bless you.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/7/2021 5:05:00 PM

Hello Pratap Roy, hi, I am happy to hear that you enjoyed the read Roy.Bkessing my friend.

Joe Dimino

Date: 10/3/2021 10:34:00 AM

Delightful! Your writing is Purely Wonderful! Thank you, Darlene.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/3/2021 10:41:00 AM

Hello Joe DiMino, Hi Joe thank you for the lovely comment. blessings my friend.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/3/2021 9:38:00 AM

Very cute, you obviously love your doggy very much, share and share alike. Love it Darlene.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/3/2021 10:42:00 AM

Hello Jennifer. She loves cheese. So i share my frilld cheese withher. Blessings my friend. Hugs.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/2/2021 12:51:00 PM

What a cute/creative~~story/write. Next time make one and a half grilled cheese sandwiches. Doggy needs her own. Have a blessed day.............................

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/2/2021 3:07:00 PM

Hello Paula, Ah! That is a great idea. Yes doggy neds her own. Hugs. Enjoy your weekend.

Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 10/2/2021 11:45:00 AM

very lovely write..

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/2/2021 3:09:00 PM

Hello Yolanda, So nice to meet you. Yolanda have a great weekend my friend.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/1/2021 4:59:00 PM

aww what a sweet touching poem Darlene, thanks so much for sharing this gem with the soupers:-) hugs jan xx

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/2/2021 3:10:00 PM

Hello Jan, your welcome Jan. Enjoy your weekend. Hugs.

Dennis Spilchuk

Date: 10/1/2021 8:37:00 AM

Reminds me of the Elvis Presley movie "Follow That Dream", where the one boy splits the chocolate bar unevenly, and then consumes the extra length of the longer piece to make them both even before giving one of the pieces to his brother. Nice write, Darlene.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/1/2021 2:58:00 PM

Hello Denis Spilchuk, oh I never did see that movie with Elvis Presley. i missed that one. In this poem the dog gets most of\the grilled cheese. Thank you Denis. enjoy your evening my friend.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/30/2021 11:42:00 AM

I feed my dogs exactly like this!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/30/2021 3:18:00 PM

Hello Caren, oh! Why not. It is nice that both of you enjoy the same snack. Hugs.

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 9/30/2021 7:42:00 AM

Dogs just gobble down any treat that available, grilled cheese sandwich yummy...Delice

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/30/2021 10:33:00 AM

Hello Delice, Yes, I had one for lunch today. Thank you for the lovely comment. Hugs.

Brian Sambourne

Date: 9/29/2021 4:51:00 PM

Grilled cheese - wonderful, warming sandwich for a fall day! And puppies love cheese too - I know that from experience. Be well. Brian

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/30/2021 10:35:00 AM

Hello Brian Sambourne, Yes Biran, puppies and older dogs also love grilled cheese. i have them all year round. Be well Darlene.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/29/2021 1:36:00 PM

Loved the sharing!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/29/2021 3:01:00 PM

Hello Kim, thank you for the lovely comment. Hugs.

Mike Gentile

Date: 9/29/2021 12:51:00 PM

It is so mice to share Darlene! I share with my Monte regularly!!! Happy Wednesday xxoo

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/29/2021 3:02:00 PM

Hello Mike Gentile, yes it is nice to share a snack with our dogs. Happy Wednesday. xxoo

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 9/29/2021 11:44:00 AM

Lovely write. Jane loves her dog. Pets want everything to be shared. Dogs are very emotional.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/29/2021 11:52:00 AM

Hello Rama, oh I agree dogs are very emotional. yes they want to eat what we eat. blessings my friend.

Plabi Pradhan

Date: 9/29/2021 11:35:00 AM

Grilled cheese is too yum. This is yummy cute poetry Darlene ma'am. Take love.

Plabi Pradhan
Date: 9/29/2021 12:31:00 PM

A little bit hungry. Haha... By the way have a great lunch tomorrow.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/29/2021 11:56:00 AM

Hello Plabi, I love grilled cheese. I am having that for lunch tomorrow. Thank you for the lovely comment. Did you get hungry? Blessing my friend.

Judy Ball

Date: 9/29/2021 7:04:00 AM

My dogs are so hurt if I don't share. Cute one Darlene. God Bless, JB

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/29/2021 10:02:00 AM

Hello Judy, yes dogs want us to share our lunches with them. God Bless. Enjoy your day. Hugs.

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 9/29/2021 5:35:00 AM

An inspiring story about sharing! Love this creative poem, Darlene. Hugs ~ Mala

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/29/2021 6:04:00 AM

Hello Mala, hi! Thank you for the lovely comment. Hugs Darlene Love, & Friendship

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/29/2021 5:26:00 AM

You crafted a well-penned poem, and sharing is a great feeling to develop between friends and family members. Thanks for sharing, Darlene.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/29/2021 6:06:00 AM

Hello Tayeb, Thank you for the lovely comment. Your welcome my friend. Enjoy your day.

Beata Agustin

Date: 9/28/2021 9:05:00 PM

Wow! Thanks for sharing this... God bless you.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/29/2021 6:07:00 AM

Hello Agustin Beata, Oh, thank you for the lovely comment. Blessing my friend.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 9/28/2021 6:08:00 PM

I love sharing too, and thank you for stopping by and saying Hello, it means so much, nice to know I have friends on the other side, xo

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/29/2021 6:08:00 AM

Hello Mystic Rose, Rose, yes you dp have friends on the other side. Your welcome. xo Hugs.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/28/2021 6:03:00 PM

this is darling!!!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/29/2021 6:09:00 AM

Hello Andrea, thank you Andrea. Blessings my friend. Hugs.