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Love Lost

Lost Love In that long dark sadness of your leaving Neither star nor moon will give light to me And no sunlit dawn will ease my grieving, Neither time nor distance enlighten me. But return with love as your alibi And your excuses for departing done. Then does the bright dawn light the darkened sky And hope reborn with the arisen sun. Should your stay be shorter than a Winter’s day When the scarcely lit hours cold comfort give, Then leave and let me with sharp sorrow stay And in darkening dusk’s dying hours live. Your name is joy and joyful your return, But not to return; dawn to dusk will turn. 07/21/18

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Date: 8/21/2018 7:48:00 AM
Evident sorrow in a wonderfully expressed writing. I just love this kind of poetry, it strikes the heart..
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 8/22/2018 4:49:00 AM
Thank you very much, Karen. // Barry
Date: 8/8/2018 2:22:00 AM
Well expressed sorrow in this lovely winning poem Barry. Congratulations!
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 8/9/2018 3:24:00 PM
Thank you very much, Connie. // Barry
Date: 8/1/2018 6:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. This is a beautiful sorrowful sonnet. Enjoyed.
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 8/3/2018 4:41:00 AM
Thank you very much, Susan. // Barry
Date: 8/1/2018 3:35:00 PM
Beautifully sad, Barry. And I see it is a winner, so congrats on a well deserved win!
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 8/3/2018 4:40:00 AM
Thank you very much, Andrea. // Barry
Date: 7/31/2018 5:11:00 PM
A lovely Sonnet, so sad, but beautifully written, Barry. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Sandra
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 8/1/2018 2:41:00 PM
Thank you very much, Sandra. // Barry
Date: 7/31/2018 3:06:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Barry. Well done.
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 8/1/2018 2:40:00 PM
Thank you, LIne. // Barry
Date: 7/31/2018 11:30:00 AM
Beautiful, Barry. Congrats!
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 8/1/2018 2:40:00 PM
Thank you, Dale. // Barry
Date: 7/31/2018 12:45:00 AM
Congrats Barry to win on this wonderful sonnet.
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 7/31/2018 11:16:00 AM
Thank you very much, Anisha. // Barry
Date: 7/30/2018 3:49:00 PM
Lovely sonnet Barry, best wishes...
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 7/31/2018 11:14:00 AM
Thank you, Charlie. // Barry
Date: 7/25/2018 4:01:00 PM
This is very well written Barry! Superb :)
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 7/25/2018 4:23:00 PM
Thank you very much, Heidi. // Barry
Date: 7/24/2018 11:52:00 PM
Such an exquisite sonnet, Barry.. Flows so smoothly! Enjoyed it.. Blessings!!
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 7/25/2018 4:27:00 AM
Thank you very much, Robertina. // Barry
Date: 7/23/2018 4:08:00 PM
Splendid Sonnet, Barry. Awesome theme, and wonderful flow.
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 7/24/2018 2:00:00 PM
Thank you very much, Harry. // Barry
Date: 7/21/2018 4:19:00 PM
Beautiful sonnet Barry of a love lost . I used to steer clear of them when I joined soup but now find them one of the best forms. Tom
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 7/21/2018 4:27:00 PM
Thank you Tom, they can be very satisfying to write. // Barry
Date: 7/21/2018 9:06:00 AM
Barry this is wonderful.Good luck with your entry.It’s already a winner for me and a favourite.Thank you
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 7/21/2018 10:20:00 AM
Thank you for your appreciation, Sylvia, I am pleased you enjoyed it. // Barry
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 7/21/2018 10:20:00 AM
Thank you for your appreciation, Sylvia, I am pleased you enjoyed it. // Barry

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