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Shadows

We are but lonesome shadows it’s true, We pay the debt that's always due; But scorn the years of no return, And weep the tears that never learn. There are lives to live and deaths to die, Stories to tell and tears to cry; For when all the willful souls have strayed, Flesh and blood will surely fade. When light and air become as one, Giving grace to a brilliant sun; Then we fly a message across the sky, To hasten the hour when wings can fly. When you are close and I am near, Then clocks tick back to yesteryear; And in my heart love blooms to sing, With summer’s snow and winter’s spring.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/17/2012 11:19:00 AM
Your imagery and emotions are well to the fore here. Well titled with marvelous phrasing, rhyme and flow. I am constantly amazed by your ability to evoke, deliver and inspire. '...summer's snow and winter's spring,' lovely! :)
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Date: 9/19/2011 7:10:00 PM
Shadows dancing in the heart. Where love and hate do play their part. The pain inside, some never know. When cold winds blow with summer snow.
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Date: 8/3/2011 7:03:00 PM
Wow, good write. This seems to take after my poem "If We Shadows." In my opinion this is one of your best.
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Date: 8/1/2011 8:31:00 PM
Hi Elizabeth, that you for your kind words. Your poem that I just read is quite lovely. I wish you the best, Tina.
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Date: 7/28/2011 11:46:00 PM
We scorn the years of no return and weep the tears that never learn. That is one of the most profound statements that I have read in a long, long time. It speaks volumes. I'm still pondering it as I write. It was vision. It was intelligence. It was beauty. Thank you Ms. Wesley for your contribution to my cerebral joy. That is what I read for. Rockman :-)
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Date: 7/28/2011 10:38:00 PM
Liked this one, nice flow and rhythm and such brilliant use of personification and wordplay in general! Thank you for sharing this poem :)
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Date: 7/28/2011 9:33:00 PM
I really want to thank you for commenting on my work Elizabeth...don't stop:-) Also, I've been busy and promise to read more of your work. You are a magnificent writer! The stanzas in this poem weave wonderful together. My favorite is the second stanza. Must have read it 5 times! "lives to live and deaths to die"...simply love your work!
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Date: 7/28/2011 5:56:00 PM
This is absolutely beautiful. Endearing write.
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Date: 7/28/2011 5:53:00 PM
Beautiful structure and rhymes. I could wish my clock tick back to some yesteryears.
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Date: 7/28/2011 2:53:00 PM
Wonderful creative writing today Elizabeth. I will be back soon to read more if the gremlins in PoetrySoup will permit. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/28/2011 11:04:00 AM
Metaphysical - "When light and air become as one." I like that. Love, daver
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Date: 7/28/2011 6:03:00 AM
Amazing poetry from you Elizabeth.Love this emotional write.
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Date: 7/28/2011 3:45:00 AM
love it . this poem has such grace, it has a haunting quality. wonderful
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Date: 7/28/2011 12:35:00 AM
Oh I really like this. Easily read and understood, beautiful imagery, good rhythm and rhyme and so uplifting. Great job. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/27/2011 10:01:00 PM
lovely creative poetry ..so emotional elizabeth.. such revealing lines luv..
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