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there is such beauty in the dark it wraps warm like mother's arms whispers sweet, the tympans of the soul the soft, pure backdrop of the shimmering heavens and yet ... it can be a dungeon of dank horrors where impulse does not mean action intents float down endless hallways of doubt and diversion, neurons firing when they shouldn't not firing when they should notion and sense without bookends or boundary like a mad, magic show that never ends the same impulse forcing to repeat ... repeat ... repeat make flawless action of what is mundane and absurd yet if it's not done right, surely the unthinkable. there is no prison as impenetrable - as inescapable as the one in a damaged mind and no one can hear you … screaming. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Standard Contest 155 Any Form, Any Theme" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 1/7/2019 8:45:00 PM
I love the way you end some of your poems: with one word. So impactful and this poem is no exception. It stays with you and echos through the mind. Great great poem, Greg. Congratulations.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/3/2019 12:54:00 AM
Many kind thanks to you, Carole - blessings! :-) <3
Date: 1/6/2019 10:06:00 AM
Well penned, Gregory. Congrats on your top win.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/3/2019 12:54:00 AM
Thanks so much, Line! :-)
Date: 1/4/2019 5:47:00 PM
Knew this was a winner, pity 25 other number 1 poems, wonder what the point of that is?
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/3/2019 12:54:00 AM
I dunno, John, it's a bit perplexing. So glad you liked it, though! :-)
Date: 1/4/2019 11:12:00 AM
So many clear and powerful lines here. Especially, “Like a mad, magic show that never ends the same.”. And the last one leaves me haunted. Congratulations
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/3/2019 12:53:00 AM
Thank you very much, PS, I'm pleased you liked it! :-) <3
Date: 1/4/2019 10:06:00 AM
Congratulations for this excellent win . Well done ! :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/3/2019 12:53:00 AM
Many thanks to you, Heidi! :-) <3
Date: 1/4/2019 9:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Greg. May you have a happy new year with lots of blessings. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/3/2019 12:52:00 AM
And you as well, Eve, thank you so much! :-) <3
Date: 1/4/2019 5:34:00 AM
Congrats, Greg!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/3/2019 12:52:00 AM
Thanks, Kim! :-)
Date: 12/31/2018 10:35:00 AM
Wow love it Greg, I see another winner here.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/3/2019 12:52:00 AM
Thank you very much, John! :-)

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