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Seventh Age a Second Childhood

befuddled bewildered, memory muddled; perplexed then puzzled as clarity contracts and cataracts

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Margaret Foster

Date: 9/14/2011 10:07:00 PM

Not surprised to see this in number one spot. well done Brian. cheers Marg.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/13/2011 9:04:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of John, Brian

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/12/2011 11:17:00 PM

great toppings here, brian...loads of smiling cheers to you for the amazing award!! :) huggs

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 9/12/2011 8:47:00 PM

excellent piece of work. Entertaining to boot. Congrats to you Brian

Lori Lucas Mcclure

Date: 9/12/2011 5:58:00 PM

Congratulations on your stellar first place win!!! -----Lori

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/12/2011 3:08:00 PM

Congrats on your great win..Sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/12/2011 12:21:00 PM

YES old age is NOt for the faint of heart! Congrad's light & love

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/12/2011 12:02:00 PM

Congrats on your 1st place win, Brian! Kim

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/12/2011 10:04:00 AM

This one makes me smile with familiarity! (I think I know all these symptoms much too well!)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/12/2011 8:23:00 AM

Congratulations on your top win In Moses' "Alliteration Poem Please" contest Brian. Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 9/12/2011 6:02:00 AM

Sounds a bit like myself Brian. A pleasure to read your humor, Much congratulations on first place. Befuddled in Ozarks, Moses

David Williams

Date: 9/12/2011 3:44:00 AM

Brian congrats on your superb win..David

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/12/2011 12:59:00 AM

Yes its tough isn't iit? Congratulations on your no. 1 Brian. Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/12/2011 12:59:00 AM

Congrats Brian on first place win with this great Alliteration poetry my friend...luv..

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 9/12/2011 12:21:00 AM

A 1st place congratulations Brian for your placement in John Freeman's Alliteration Poems Please contest. CR

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 9/12/2011 12:06:00 AM

Dear Brian, Congratulations on YOUR Win in Moses' Contest Superb May I shake YOUR hand as I to am in the Winners Circle With YOU, with LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Liege...HG

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/5/2011 9:58:00 AM

funny write!! great alliteration!

John Smith

Date: 9/5/2011 8:04:00 AM

Alludes to Shakespare and Victor Gray's lines. Well writ.

Deepanshi Chaudhry

Date: 9/5/2011 5:55:00 AM

leaves one thinking.. especially the last two lines..

Margaret Foster

Date: 9/5/2011 5:27:00 AM

Obviously you are not talking about yourself here. This is to well written for someone in that condition. :-) :-) regards Marg