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Seven For Chaos and Order-Of Hells and Heavens

Seven For Chaos And Order-Of Hells & Heavens With Love abandoned and Demons are handed your serving succulent Soul Megalomaniacal monstrosities, hideous oddities welcome you to the devils hole Dreams of destruction for your consumption with sulphuric scorching smells Blistering blasphemous bondage, you pay homage to the Master of Hells My Soul escapes thru damnation drapes, I see the Loving Light An Angelic reunion a Holy communion, the Heavens are within sight No more enslaved my Soul is saved in harmonious habitual height. 01.28.2017 SEVEN FOR CHAOS AND ORDER ...Contest Sponsored by... nette onclaud

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Sandra Haight

Date: 2/1/2017 7:04:00 PM

Back again, Winged Warrier, to congratulate you on your fine placement! Sandra

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/1/2017 12:06:00 PM

ohh, the intensity of your words and the connection between dark and light created a very strong poetic impact, WW... great kudos on your fine award and thanks for joining..huggs

Joseph May

Date: 2/1/2017 10:04:00 AM

Congrats on your win WW

Noel Onat

Date: 1/30/2017 9:22:00 PM

Brilliant!Darkness against loving Light dramatically portrayed. Thank you for commenting on my verse.

White Wolf

Date: 1/30/2017 7:37:00 PM

I have read this before but forgot to leave a comment! Haha! Absolutely love it! And GL

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 1/30/2017 11:59:00 AM

Begins darkish hellish strong terms but ends on heavenly awesome notes. Remarkable rhyming here and I always adore alliteration and u have employed that effectively and splendid. Kudos. Pls do review my latest poem too.

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/29/2017 7:37:00 PM

What a magnificent way to handle the theme, WW! Heaven and Hell...the most powerful representation of 'chaos' and 'order'! Best wishes for the contest! 7 Sandra

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/29/2017 7:51:00 AM

This is the most interesting one I have read for the contest so far. Well expressed!

Constance La France

Date: 1/28/2017 5:39:00 PM

Winged, you took the theme so deep, I L.O.V.E. this write, 7, best of luck ~

Mark Martin

Date: 1/28/2017 1:40:00 PM

Interesting take on chaos and order. Good luck in the contest! :-)

Joseph May

Date: 1/28/2017 1:26:00 PM

An escape from bedlam to heavenly realms..Very nicely penned...