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Sequence-A Love Affair

Sensations tingling up the spine as heaving emotions re-align Flowers of beauty within the heart festoon the gestures they impart On the trail of nows-broken vows echo to a distant horizon

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/8/2008 5:31:00 PM
this is a beautiful write Michael, so elegant and right, take care D-ncye
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Date: 11/8/2008 10:02:00 AM
Brian this poem is beautiful - Always love your writing - God Bless, Michael
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Date: 11/8/2008 6:21:00 AM
so very very sad. Vows seem to mean nothing to some anymore - very sad, but beautifully written, love Kristin
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Date: 11/8/2008 6:17:00 AM
Hope I am getting this right. Some never forgive broken vows, so this beautiful write expresses a happy ending (or new beginning). Love, Shar
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Date: 11/8/2008 4:13:00 AM
provocoive I can spell, sometimes...
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Date: 11/8/2008 4:12:00 AM
Sinful nature. Provacative write Brian. Blessings Michael Torres
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Date: 11/8/2008 3:05:00 AM
Hehe Brian, thats just what happens:) Greatly penned! So much in every line. Take care, Chitra
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