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Separation Septolet

He started drinking after she left. She went to parties fully enjoying her freedom.

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Wilma Neels

Date: 7/21/2011 4:15:00 AM

Gosh the poor guy :) congratulations on your win Jack :) lfde Wilma

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/20/2011 11:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "Septolet" Jack. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/19/2011 8:53:00 PM

jack, loads of smiling cheers to you for the amazing award!! :) huggs

Elaine George

Date: 7/19/2011 8:14:00 PM

That's the way it goes sometimes. Great Septolet, Jack. Thanks for your kind comments today. Lainie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2011 7:41:00 PM

congrats on this one. So glad you got on the list. It was one of my favorites.

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 7/19/2011 4:07:00 PM

awesome take on human nature. poor guy! congratulations on your win :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/19/2011 3:52:00 PM

Congrats jack on an excellent win with this dynamite piece so creative luv... enjoyable read to think about..luv .. a wow wonder ...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/19/2011 3:28:00 PM

Congrats...Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/19/2011 2:52:00 PM

My congratulations on this win in my contest, jack

Kash Poet

Date: 7/17/2011 3:27:00 AM

Very nice.Enjoyed.Best wishes jack.

Judy Ball

Date: 7/16/2011 6:44:00 PM

It happens. Sometimes one partner expects the other to accept them the way they are and thinks they should have to make no effort in the relationship. When that happens the other partner tends to drift away. Sad and stupid and totally unnecessary. Good job here. Good luck my friend. God Bless, JB

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/16/2011 6:21:00 PM

Thanks for the entry to the contest, jack

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/16/2011 3:43:00 PM

oh Jack a good one my friend.. just like the triangle we both experienced in life.. separation is another chapter too.. good luck in the contest luv.. need to put your name on it Jack.. per Dr. Ram... okey dokey..

Francine Roberts

Date: 7/16/2011 3:42:00 PM

great entry for the contest Jack, best of luck

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/16/2011 3:25:00 PM

JACK! a swell, witty piece that make me lose my socks.. winning hugs, nette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/16/2011 3:21:00 PM

ALL right. YOu know women!!!! Good one.

Mourning Mist

Date: 7/16/2011 3:11:00 PM

sounds sad to throw ones life into booze and parties from a parting.. I use to live that lifestyle before I knew christ, and he helped me grow up to be a big girl..now I go to festivals (eco), libraries etc..for entertainment instead..i became a big girl with Jesus :)