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Senyru- It Is Done

in one last death gasp a son calls with a sad sigh it is done father ______________________ April 11, 2017 Senyru/it is done Copyright Protected, ID 891651 For the contest Easter Haiku or Senryu Laura Loo First Place

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Eve Roper

Date: 4/22/2017 6:18:00 PM

Well done, Broken Wings, congratulations on your win. ~*

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 4/22/2017 12:58:00 PM

The best of the bunch in my book. Your image of Easter is clear and concise like a haiku should be. Congratulations.

Debbie Duncan

Date: 4/21/2017 11:54:00 PM

Awesome, first place, favs :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/19/2017 11:42:00 AM

The weight of the world from the beginning of time! Congrats, Constance!

John Michaels

Date: 4/14/2017 5:07:00 AM

Wow! Like all great Haiku, this could have so many interpretations... then you see which contest it's been written for and that one fits so well. Good luck with the contest!

Paul Callus

Date: 4/14/2017 3:54:00 AM

An expressive Senryu which impressively transmits a main chapter of our salvation. ~ Wishing you a happy and blessed Easter, Constance. // paul

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 4/13/2017 8:44:00 AM

What a lovely and well penned poem. Good luck.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/12/2017 5:16:00 PM

Good Evening Broken. This is extraordinary. You have captured the entire essence being and meaning. Well done in all areas. Best of luck with the contest.

Chris Green

Date: 4/12/2017 6:02:00 AM

So very cool. What a perfect poem for the contest. I just love how this feels to read.

Constance La France
Date: 4/12/2017 8:59:00 AM

Chris thanks for the love.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/12/2017 2:05:00 AM

Amen...beautiful piece, dear. With those words our salvation became sure. Good luck in the contest.

Constance La France
Date: 4/12/2017 8:55:00 AM

Eileen thanks for the beautiful.

Maria Williams

Date: 4/12/2017 1:41:00 AM

What a lovely Senyru. I have the greatest respect for these forms of poetry, having a Japanese daughter-in-law, who has inspired me a lot, including believing that less is more, and you have in these 3 lines conveyed that and invoked emotion as well. Brilliant, a 7+++

Constance La France
Date: 4/12/2017 8:56:00 AM

Maria thank you for the brilliant.

John Beam

Date: 4/11/2017 8:04:00 PM

Very nice and He is risen!

Constance La France
Date: 4/12/2017 8:57:00 AM

John thanks for the visit