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Senryu 04-11-17

in one last death gasp a son calls with a sad sigh it is done father ______________________ April 11, 2017 Poetry/senryu/4/11/17 Copyright Protected, ID 04-1316-030-11 All Rights Reserved, 2017, Constance La France Submitted to the Standard contest, Podium Placement Promise (1) sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 12/28/20 First Place

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Joanna Feltham

Date: 1/1/2021 2:51:00 AM

This poem lead me wanting to hear more. Very intriguing. Congratulations on your winning placement.

Constance La France
Date: 1/1/2021 4:34:00 AM

Joanna, thanks for the congratulations and the nice comment _Constance

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/31/2020 9:45:00 AM

This one is a very well constructed message of faith. Congrats on your winner. Sara

Constance La France
Date: 12/31/2020 1:25:00 PM

Sara, thanks for the nice comment and the congrats _Constance

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 12/28/2020 7:26:00 PM

Congratulations, Constance, on your win!! I can hear his sigh in your words!!

Constance La France
Date: 12/29/2020 10:13:00 AM

Newton, thanks for the congratulations and the beautiful comment _Constance

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/28/2020 8:09:00 AM

Congratulation on your win. Few words with much said. Enjoy your win. Today, have joy/blessings.................

Constance La France
Date: 12/28/2020 9:05:00 AM

Paula, thanks so much for the congratulation, a few words is the skill of Senryu _Constance

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 12/28/2020 3:02:00 AM

Love this. God B L E S S you and Congrats on your top win

Constance La France
Date: 12/28/2020 9:05:00 AM

Gina, thanks for the love and the congrats, god bless _Constance

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/26/2020 5:14:00 PM

Such an excellent entry this was for the season, Dear Heart.

Constance La France
Date: 12/28/2020 9:06:00 AM

Andrea, thanks so much for the excellent, I love that word _ Constance

Paul Callus

Date: 12/26/2020 2:16:00 AM

An excellent and expressive delivery, Constance! Best regards // paul

Constance La France
Date: 12/26/2020 8:31:00 AM

Paul, thanks for the compliment, appreciate a lot _Constance

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/24/2020 7:23:00 AM

So lovely, Constance--a deeply moving reminder of the Lord's words on the Cross! Janice

Constance La France
Date: 12/24/2020 1:09:00 PM

Janice, thanks for the nice comment _Constance

Howard Kerr

Date: 12/24/2020 4:20:00 AM

Hello Constance, A Senyru with great depth. Well done. Thanks for selecting my work in your recent Christmas contest. I appreciate that. Happy Christmas Howard

Constance La France
Date: 12/24/2020 1:09:00 PM

Howard, thanks for the compliment on my poem and you are welcome on your win _Constance

Jan Allison

Date: 12/23/2020 4:49:00 PM

heartbreakingly sad Constance:-( hugs jan xx

Constance La France
Date: 12/23/2020 5:12:00 PM

Jan, thank you for visiting and commenting on my poem _Constance