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Senryu 4 1 2021

** ** ** ** ** ** ** ** ** ** ** ** ******************** ** ** wind rocks me to sleep. ** surely, as if it’s Winter. ** no April fooling! ** *****************

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/5/2021 12:28:00 PM

Love the way you typed this up like winter and threw it into the poem - so well done!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/6/2021 7:40:00 PM

Thank you so much! :)

Robert Pettit

Date: 4/2/2021 6:24:00 AM

I agree with what everyone below has said about your nice senryu.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/6/2021 7:40:00 PM

Thank you, Robert!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/2/2021 1:32:00 AM

Nice senryu, Kim:)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/2/2021 5:34:00 AM

Thank you, Jo!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/1/2021 10:27:00 PM

So well done Kim. Those were the days when I had to push a pram :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/2/2021 5:34:00 AM

They were special days! :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/1/2021 8:31:00 PM

Nicely done! The message and format work together well. Happy Easter

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/2/2021 5:33:00 AM

Happy Easter, Eileen! Thank you!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/1/2021 7:42:00 PM

No fooling April either! lol. Cheers and Happy April, Gershon

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/2/2021 5:33:00 AM

Happy April 2 you ;)

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/1/2021 6:36:00 PM

Bravo ~ this is very cute, Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/2/2021 5:33:00 AM

Thank you, Line :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/1/2021 3:12:00 PM

Very creative Kim, Wishing you a very happy Easter. Tom

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/1/2021 5:47:00 PM

Happy Easter, Tom! Thank you :)

Jan Allison

Date: 4/1/2021 2:51:00 PM

clever one Kim, love the format too!:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/1/2021 5:47:00 PM

Thank you, Jan! :)