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Sedoka Contest

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Sedoka Contest


I stare at the sky 
lost in the swirling motion
wind driven clouds hurry past
open hearted sigh,
large as a wide, blue ocean
here in this garden's leaf cast. 

Sedoku  Modern

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Date: 1/28/2016 9:10:00 PM
Hi Suz,, Congrats on your interesting win. Love LINDA -
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 1/29/2016 2:12:00 AM
Thanks PD I appreciate you visiting my work. Much love, SuZ
Date: 1/18/2016 10:37:00 AM
SUZANNE, Congrats on your "SEDOKA FORM (Rhymed) winning poem." love SKAT**
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Date: 1/19/2016 3:53:00 PM
Thanks SKAT: Always a joy to hear from you. SuZ
Date: 1/18/2016 10:11:00 AM
Suzanne, thank you for being a part of my contest! Be blessed *smiles* -luloo
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Date: 1/19/2016 3:52:00 PM
Thanks Laura for the high placement. Cheers, SuZ
Date: 1/16/2016 5:18:00 AM
A lovely sedoka, Suzanne. T.J
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Date: 1/13/2016 8:10:00 PM
well done for the modern sedoka. I sure enjoy seeing this form!
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Date: 1/13/2016 8:51:00 PM
Thanks Andrea: This is the first time I tried a Sedoka. Fun trying new forms. SuZ
Date: 1/13/2016 5:02:00 AM
I love it, Suz...both the lovely content, imagery, and the insightful title! gl in the contest. ~ Regards // paul
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 1/13/2016 12:27:00 PM
Thankyou Paul: Your support always warms my heart. SuZ