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Seasons of Trees - Split Haikus Trees with sprouting limbs bathed by spring's April showers don their lacy green robes Trees with dense full limbs swayed by warm summer breezes spread their green velvet capes Trees with brilliant limbs whirled by the cool autumn winds shed their burnished gold gowns Trees with cold bare limbs frozen by winter blizzards drape their white fluffy scarves Sandra M. Haight ~3rd Place~ Contest: Mystics Split-Haikus Sponsor: Mystic Rose Judged: 04/05/2016 Syllables of 5, 7, 1, 5

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/6/2016 9:49:00 PM

Sandra, Congratulations on your "MYSTICS SPLIT HAIKU win." ~LINDA~

Lin Lane

Date: 4/6/2016 3:16:00 PM

I love the way you dressed the trees. Congratulations, Sandra.

Sandra Haight
Date: 4/6/2016 7:21:00 PM

Thank you so much, Lin. Hugs, Sandra

Balveen Cheema

Date: 4/6/2016 5:43:00 AM

Beautiful, Sandra! Congrats on your placement!

Sandra Haight
Date: 4/6/2016 7:21:00 PM

Thank you, Balveen. Hugs, Sandra

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/6/2016 2:09:00 AM

Congrats on a worthy win with these superb haikus Sandra..

Sandra Haight
Date: 4/6/2016 7:15:00 PM

Thank you so much, Dr. Upma. Hugs, Sandra

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/5/2016 5:33:00 PM

another one I am very glad to see on the winners' list. Congrats, dearie

Sandra Haight
Date: 4/6/2016 7:13:00 PM

Thank you so much, Andrea. Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison

Date: 4/5/2016 5:07:00 PM

Beautifully penned haiku congrats on your win Sandra:-) hugs jan xx

Sandra Haight
Date: 4/6/2016 7:12:00 PM

Thank you, Jan. Hugs, Sandra

Lu Loo

Date: 4/5/2016 4:59:00 PM

Sandra, a wonderful split haiku, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo

Sandra Haight
Date: 4/6/2016 7:12:00 PM

Thank you so much, Laura! Hugs, Sandra

Timothy Hicks

Date: 4/2/2016 8:42:00 PM

A fun and creative way to do these split haiku, Sandra. I also liked how you used your one syllable lines to your advantage, using meaningful words: don, spread, shed, drape. Some I've read use words like, "a, an, the, of" etc., which sounds somewhat off to me. Best of luck, my friend!

Sandra Haight
Date: 4/3/2016 8:05:00 AM

Thank you, Tim, for your detailed and positive comment. I am pleased you liked the way I wrote this, and I appreciate visit and support very much. Sandra

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/1/2016 7:34:00 PM

you did yours in a very cute way, Sandra. I bet Mystic will enjoy these.

Sandra Haight
Date: 4/3/2016 8:05:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea, for your positive comment! Hugs, Sandra

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/31/2016 6:53:00 PM

well done, Sandra.. i enjoyed. LINDA

Sandra Haight
Date: 4/1/2016 4:07:00 PM

Thank you very much, Linda. Hugs, Sandra

Lu Loo

Date: 3/30/2016 1:38:00 PM

Very lovely Sandra, wonderful split haikus, good luck in the contest :)-luloo