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Seasons

My skin is no more fancy clothes I have worn it too long Yet in it I must still repose While the maggots' teeth grow strong What kind of purpose can there be For bones that rattle in their bag For youth and paling mortality For skin so sagged like worn out rag They say beauty is on the inside But when you are old you wish The first impression was not to hide What some could know as sweet relish In the thing on which it gazed. In A culture where youth is beauty What shall I do with crinkled skin That for desire saddles me with pity? I am the fifth season of the earth That goes and will not return For coming once was sadly hurt When youth my advances spurn.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/10/2009 5:09:00 PM
Dear L'nass,Congratulation on YOUR Featured POEM "Seasons" I agree with Vince Bodies are not Wrinkle Free Awesome Write ALWAYS.. .HG
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Date: 5/10/2009 6:22:00 AM
I liked how you started...and ended your Seasons, a poem worth reading...and a wonderful write deserving of a feature, well done! Rgds, E!
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Date: 5/10/2009 2:11:00 AM
L'nass, nice work and congrats on your feature...Raul
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Date: 5/8/2009 12:19:00 PM
Congrats on being featured with this strong poem L'nass, James.
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Date: 5/7/2009 5:38:00 AM
L'nass,...this poetry is strong! And for this moment I will be the cantilever, so you may peer at, even the for the least, what you will leave, when you know as well as I,..we will all repose in death. You will be back,..I have faith! And what you have done for us,...left us many words that will stay wide awake as you do rest! Write, write write my poetic friend! And congrats on being featured! <---see! james
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Date: 5/6/2009 11:43:00 AM
congradulations on being featured this week. john h loving iii
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Date: 5/5/2009 5:48:00 PM
Wonderful writing my friend. Congratulations on having this one featured this week. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 5/4/2009 8:56:00 AM
Congratulations, this is so great.
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Date: 5/4/2009 7:46:00 AM
Congrats L'nass on the featuring of "Seasons." I can sure relate to this one. They don't sell bodies like they do dress pants, wrinkle free. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 5/4/2009 6:43:00 AM
Just another brilliant write! Warmest congrats on an amazing feature. Love, Shar
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Date: 5/4/2009 5:30:00 AM
Aging isn't that bad, L'nass. Just get an old hampster to love...laughing at myself and kidding around. I hope you don't mind my aged humor. I love your poem. It is, as you are on the inside, beautiful. I can't see the outside. But remember "Beauty is in the eye of the beholder." So, find an older beholder. Sorry, I can't stop. It must be old age. And I love it! (I can't believe I'm joking about a serious and beautiful poem.) Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Love, Dane
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Date: 5/4/2009 3:52:00 AM
Wonderful writing, Congratulations on being featured, kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.
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Date: 5/4/2009 3:24:00 AM
well written my friend congrats on your feature, God bless you from diane
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Date: 5/4/2009 1:07:00 AM
Congrats on your feature this week ,nassRgds Brian
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Date: 5/3/2009 11:35:00 PM
L'nass my friend, congrats on your featured poetry this week. Thumbs up! Mine is also featured. Ernilando
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Date: 5/3/2009 6:50:00 PM
Powerful indeed. In age, we are grace. Hugs. :) Congrats on the feature!
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Date: 5/3/2009 6:27:00 PM
Powerful way to forward your message in this one. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! I wish you continued success. Karen
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Date: 5/3/2009 5:51:00 PM
Congratulations on this one in the featured poems this week. some of us can identify to the sagging bag of bones!! :)...Well done!!
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Date: 3/20/2009 11:44:00 PM
maybe skin is a bit wrinkled,but surely we can't be judged by the skin,the poet remains young in the heart my friend,im 31years,when im 100 i b old;-).very nice poem-charma
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Date: 3/13/2009 2:56:00 PM
Great write here L'nass !! At 66 I've got a few years on you and have written many writes here about aging and our society's emphasis on the outside of folks ... smile ... Thanks for bring your writing to PoetrySoup and I'll send you a birthday blog on the 28th.
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