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When the infinite sky is motionless above me, and a deep cerulean blue and the air is withering; I go to my secret place deep in the lush forest, and beside an aquamarine stream I lay my blanket. On summer days like this I feel lazy and hazy, drifting into solitude- I begin to notice sweet smells; of herbs growing close by in brilliant chartreuse, and clusters of precious fragrant purplish lavender. Oh, delicious the view and perfumes of the forest, and my childhood delight- lemon yellow dandelions; bringing back memories of walks with my mother, and the rows of drooping treasures on her kitchen sill. A little walk about in the silence of birds chirping, and I find a group of coral bells thriving in the sun; I recall a cabin had once been in this very spot, and oh heaven- I discover the herb saffron in lilac. Soon, I gather my bouquets of fragrant discoveries, and leave the forest, refreshed and inspired; what a wonderful retreat this has been on a hot day, to dwell in the green, rich with seasonal color. ________________ August 18, 2017 Poetry/Verse/My Secret Place Copyright Protected, ID 17- 9315-48-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted into contest Number 460 Sponsor, Brian Strand Fifth Place

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Date: 7/7/2018 4:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done!
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Date: 7/6/2018 9:21:00 AM
Beautiful . congratulations on your win hugs Eve
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Date: 7/6/2018 12:15:00 AM
A delightful calming read for late at night. Congratulations on a fine write and a generous placement in Brian's contest.
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Date: 7/5/2018 10:02:00 PM
Phenomenal imagery, BW. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/5/2018 8:19:00 PM
Such beautiful, serene imagery brought forth in your lovely poem, Constance. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/5/2018 7:21:00 PM
you describe a lovely place. Congrats on your placement.
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Date: 8/19/2017 1:05:00 AM
This is so beautiful my friend! I surely loved reading this awesome poem this morning (early)! What a delight this piece really is, so wondrous in all its splendor! Great Work!!
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Date: 8/18/2017 10:47:00 PM
" and the rows of drooping treasures on her kitchen sill." I loved this line. It brought back memories of posies I used to pick for my mother. This is wonderful BW. Good luck in the contest. -- Dean
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Date: 8/18/2017 1:21:00 PM
Wow what a wonderful retreat you brought the reader on with this Broken Wings! Good luck in the contest. I hope it does well. :)
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