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Drowning in a Sea of Trees: Understanding Aokigahara, Japan's "Suicide  Forest" - Unseen Japan

(for Aokigahara ... the souls lost) ~ jade canopy waving while it whispers the lush secret, compelled delicious word of myriad words casting shadowed merriment at a woven briar carpet colored strings, winding... waiting tangled labyrinth, so deep and dark that dew still clings at mid-day, leafy tresses tickling azure, sopping sun like thirst - bright and warm above straight trunks like steady soldiers fingery tendrils burrow deep to find purchase - ruddy earth, cool as rime, rich with rooty rot - nature's marrow to breathe the branches Fuji's frilly garden skirt listen, tender... soft now, the hush of mys'tries - this forest bides all, yet stars still glisten its black heart - desire, a mossy coat ... dour... waiting hear the voice, low, the breath of breaths, murmuring - it begs, come... in a thousand gentle lullabies, with the language of the ages and the ends - voice sweet as death it calls to the misty meandering, one dire dalliance - grandest adventure of all - the dazzling dream that never wakes. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Your 2021 N/A Choice 2" Poetry Contest, William Kekaula, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 5/4/2021 8:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A creative and beautiful write and picture. Have a blessed day..............
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Date: 5/3/2021 9:00:00 PM
Back with congratulation Greg! So wonderful to see the very special poem at the top of the podium again! Blessings my friend.
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Date: 5/3/2021 6:36:00 PM
Your entrancing fluidity impresses its form -- the quintessential YOU, Greg!!! I'm loving this 'going blind', admittedly challenging (dares a peek), alas, unalterably committed wins out. My gratitude for your participation and my compliments on your well-deserved trophy my friend, Aloha!
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Date: 5/5/2021 5:18:00 PM
Thank you so very kindly, William, this placement and your comment mean a great deal to me, and this poem nis special to me as well. I am honored and humbled to be in such fine company! Blessings and gratitude, My Friend!
Date: 12/26/2020 10:12:00 AM
So many wonderfully expressive word combinations here: 'shadowed merriment,' ...'tangled labyrinth'...'rooty rot.' A most enjoyable read. Best wishes, Brian
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Date: 12/15/2020 6:18:00 PM
Such choice forest primeval imagery casting a dreamlike spell, Bard. Congrats on your win with this; it's always a poetic pleasure to read your writing. Hope all is well in your household protecting your Mom from the virus ~ John
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Date: 12/14/2020 7:27:00 PM
Congratulations on this incredible piece of poetry - it's like several stunning images woven into a mural that breathes hope - and I do hope for more - Your W O R D S have inspired my heart and soul! Beautiful. God bless you
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Date: 12/14/2020 12:04:00 PM
BIG congratulations. Stunning imagery, Greg.
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Date: 12/14/2020 10:47:00 AM
So many life filled images, Greg! This is a vivid picture. You have engaged so many of our senses not just sight but sound, taste and scent all beautifully integrated. Congratulations on your win my friend. Sending you the blessings of the sights, sounds, tastes and aromas of this season of blessings and miracles.
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Date: 12/14/2020 6:53:00 AM
Marvelous! A well-deserved podium finish, Greg:-)
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Date: 12/14/2020 6:20:00 AM
Congratulations, Greg, on your placement for this wonderfully beautiful painting!!
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Date: 12/14/2020 5:02:00 AM
WoW! Greg, Your descriptions, content, and imagery is outstanding. Congratulations on your trophy win. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/9/2020 10:19:00 AM
well, I see I needed to come HERE and comment at least!! This oozes descriptiveness and atmosphere, Greg.
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Date: 12/7/2020 12:40:00 PM
And this poetic gift is a fav my friend. One that has surely been born from then pen of a master poet...
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Date: 12/7/2020 12:38:00 PM
Definitely a true masterpiece my friend. This true gem has now inspired me to write today. As such your magnificent piece has led another to the well of memory. To the altar of poetry and its healing and beautiful blessings of positive energy and life.... God bless...
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