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Sea and Sand

boys and girls each has fun as their folk chase the sun hot hot hot bluest sky lie on sand aaaah they sigh nice day out kiss me quick eat and drink take your pick beauties bathe in the sea not a care great to see oh praise be! For Linda-Marie's Beach Blanket Bingo contest Jack Horne

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Date: 7/7/2011 6:01:00 PM
Congrats on your win..Reads like a fun day at the beach...Sara
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Date: 7/7/2011 4:29:00 PM
Hot-Hot-Hot is right! Congrats. to you Jack!
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Date: 7/6/2011 4:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Jack. I'm sorry to hear about your wife. I'm sending her telepathic hugs.
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Date: 7/6/2011 4:45:00 AM
Congratulations Jack on your win in Linda-Marie's "Beach Blanket Bingo" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/5/2011 8:44:00 PM
I like how you made such short cute rhymes of yours. congrats on your win, Jack!
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Date: 7/5/2011 6:09:00 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of linda, jack
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Date: 7/5/2011 4:24:00 PM
Very cute entry Jack. Congratulations on a win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/5/2011 3:59:00 PM
Congrats Jack on 9th place win with this super cool entry luv..thankxx so much for your constant support..
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Date: 6/26/2011 9:16:00 AM
thank you for commenting on Halleys comet.
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Date: 6/22/2011 3:53:00 PM
Very nice indeed....good luck love....thanks again for your kind comment....good day.....
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Date: 6/22/2011 1:54:00 PM
I really enjoyed your entry for Linda's contest Jack.. Good luck to you ;-)
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Date: 6/21/2011 3:46:00 PM
This is delightful Jack, I am sure Linda will love it, and thanks so much for all your encouraging comments on my poetry, I appreciate that so much~~
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Date: 6/17/2011 8:29:00 PM
Again, thanks for inspiring me with this one of yous. I have mine written but am gonna wait a while before posting!
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Date: 6/17/2011 4:08:00 PM
Oh, I can just see you watching the sunbathing ladies, Jack. (And just what is that look on Sue's face saying???) Wishing you success in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/17/2011 2:45:00 PM
thank you for commenting on God's MasterPiece
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Date: 6/17/2011 1:20:00 PM
thankxx Jack... soup mail luv..
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Date: 6/17/2011 11:49:00 AM
a great one Jack, it was a wonderful well written piece of poetry, good luck in contest.
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Date: 6/17/2011 11:30:00 AM
A great write here ..Jack...you have done it wonderfully...best wishes.
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Date: 6/17/2011 8:24:00 AM
OK my friend I just entered your first contest on Ghosts with a write I luv as it is a true story like most of mine .. star crossed lovers ..oh.. good luck my friend and thankxx for encouraging me to enter .... knew it would be irresistible.. wow..
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Date: 6/16/2011 8:37:00 PM
Hey you make this look so easy, I gotta do one now!!! CUTE cute cute!
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Date: 6/16/2011 6:03:00 PM
thankxx for supporting my current contest Jack.. good luck luv.. appreciate ... next time will enter one u are sponsoring ...promise luv.. thankxxx..
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Date: 6/16/2011 3:14:00 PM
You can get a great musical flow going as you read this...Great Fun.......I love the few words to express you point~^Rick
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Date: 6/16/2011 1:52:00 PM
Very hilarious write creating fine visuals, jack, good luck in the contest
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