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Scream, Gone

Stomp, stomp, stomp, Scream, scream, scream, Before the stomp, stomp, stomps, He, she, they screamed screamed, And screamed, at I, Scream at I which the thoughts, Of comeback come near, near, and nearer, Stomp, stomp, stomp, I hear the stomps, they come closer, And closer and closer, Stomp, stomp, stomp My heart beating faster, faster, faster! The room, spinning, spinning, spinning! Times going, gone, gone! Stomps coming closer, faster! The screams getting louder, louder! Stomp, scream, stomp! Nothings more worse than when you see the, He, she, they behind the stomping of the stomps, The screaming, of the screams, The fire, hell, saddened in the eyes, Is what hurts most, rather than the, Stomp, stomp, stomp, Or the, Scream, scream, scream.

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Date: 12/22/2009 12:05:00 PM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor and the best to you in the finals Amanda. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 9:04:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/20/2009 10:16:00 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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Date: 12/5/2009 12:48:00 AM
Wow! You had me locked in to that poem awaiting the end. A rare skill.
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Date: 12/1/2009 3:57:00 PM
Interesting thoughts put to pen.Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 12/1/2009 4:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poem being featured this week Amanda. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/30/2009 12:46:00 PM
Many congratulations on your poem being featured Amanda >> James
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Date: 11/30/2009 10:08:00 AM
Amanda, congratulations on your feature this week. Sincerely, Love, Moses
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Date: 11/30/2009 5:55:00 AM
Excellente write. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A. W. www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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