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Scotlands Capital

On Scotland’s eastern side so grand there is Edinburgh the nation’s capital full of beautiful buildings so magnificent enraptures the mind truly so rational Standing high looking down on Princess street it’s castle stands announcing each day at one so rock solid like it’s mighty awesome sound surrounded by it’s grassy slopes brightly run Walking down the hilly royal mile viewing so many sights colours so real St Giles church stands there supreme so much to see more time need to steal Take a trip down to Ocean Terminal visit the royal Britannia on water’s edge look round this magnificent liner such grandeur not just a little wedge Historically facts all abound in this city of such great past many tales there can be told it’s all one great big gas!

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Date: 6/25/2016 7:18:00 AM
Very nice read ... Why the devastation in the concluding line? or my shortcoming?
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 6/25/2016 5:16:00 PM
Thanks Probir, glad you liked it, the last line means having good time, hope that explains it, blessings, Gordon

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