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Scary Night-Mystery

Scary night sky streaked in shades of indigo mysteries. Blazing light explodes - Sudden air strike unravels swooshing surprise as ravaging bombs destroy slumbering silence with shocking sound. Date: 08/05/2017 Note: For the contest (Form - S) by Broken Wings. *Placed Fifth*

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/16/2017 5:19:00 PM

Very powerful Sijo, Afzal. The imagery is stark and impeccably truthful. Such a gritty down-to-the-bone expose of the atrocious machinations of man. Searing hot poetry, my friend. Excellent star bright write. An instant fave. Love and peace always, bruh.

Eve Roper

Date: 8/18/2017 2:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Afzal, . ~*

Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/30/2017 1:45:00 AM

Thank you, Eve.

Alesia Leach

Date: 8/13/2017 1:41:00 PM

War is horrifying and you've captured with your words. Good Luck in the contest!

Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/16/2017 12:48:00 AM

Thank you, Alesia.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/6/2017 7:04:00 PM

GREAT job showing this scary night. Yes, I think to be in the midst of any kind of war or turmoil is THE worst thing ever!!

Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/6/2017 10:35:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by, Andrea.

Paul Callus

Date: 8/5/2017 10:17:00 AM

The picture you present in these three lines is expressive and impressive, Afzal. Unfortunately many are those living such terrible situations! // paul

Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/5/2017 12:25:00 PM

All we can do is pray and hope for the best. Thanks for the kind comments, Paul.