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Savior of My Soul

Sacrificing Yourself to save me from gruesome sin’s penalty, Accepting condescension for my soul’s glorious eternity… Victor are You*, prevailing in Your grace-driven authority! In Your control, I find freedom midst guilt-imprisoning presence Overcoming evil’s attacks by Your omnipotence-license Rescued to win others toward You, with triumph’s iridescence! *Luke 1:47 And my spirit hath rejoiced in God my Saviour. June 18, 2018 2nd Place, "When Line Six is a Perfect Fix" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Silent One; judged on 6/20/2018.

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Date: 5/18/2020 7:58:00 AM
Hi, Ms. B. Thank you for you God's Talent to share it to us. It really inspired us.
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Date: 6/23/2018 8:40:00 PM
Congratulations ,Beata, on a great inspirational win.. . Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 6/22/2018 9:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this six line acrostic rhyme. Not an easy thing to do. Inspirational.
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Beata Agustin
Date: 6/23/2018 5:20:00 AM
Praise God! Thanks for your comment.
Date: 6/21/2018 4:02:00 PM
A beautifully praising poem Beata with a great last line. Congratulations on your wonderful win! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Beata Agustin
Date: 6/23/2018 5:21:00 AM
Praise God. Thanks. I appreciate your comment.
Date: 6/20/2018 6:45:00 PM
- A skilled and great 6 line poem, from you, Beata :) - It must have been difficult to judge, I think everyone is amazing, with different themes - Congratulations on a well deserved 2nd place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne -Lise :)
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Beata Agustin
Date: 6/20/2018 7:48:00 PM
Praise God! Thanks so much. Indeed, I appreciate your comments. God bless you.
Date: 6/20/2018 4:03:00 PM
Great six line acrostic Beata...
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Beata Agustin
Date: 6/20/2018 7:49:00 PM
Praise God! Thanks so much. Indeed, I appreciate your comments. God bless you.

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