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Jasmines of Love

Jeopardy of love's jasmines Attitude threatens the petals Stable and sweet one moment Miserable the next Inner insecurities Nitpicking on trivialities Ectacy of passion yet resets Smoothly falling in amorous lap..

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Date: 6/30/2023 10:19:00 PM
Very well Painted S.Zaynab
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Date: 2/23/2022 1:38:00 PM
Your words are so true. Such a powerful problem. Each word carries so much meaning.. Great poem!
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Date: 10/31/2021 6:14:00 PM
Very nicely penned zaynab :) Linda
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Date: 6/1/2021 9:00:00 AM
Congratulations. It's a lovely poem ~ Mala
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Date: 5/23/2021 11:39:00 AM
Your lines speak of small issues that become enormous. Clever in an acrostic. Each of them, can become a deal breaker. Good write.
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