Santa Claus and His Great Surprise

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Santa Claus And His Great Surprise I woke up in awe last night With my magical lantern’s glittering light Leading me down the staircase Where Santa Claus was sitting on his huge suitcase He winked at me with his loving smiles “Come little girl, get your prize I’ve toys for you and nice dresses You’ve been so good, I was so impressed” Santa gave me his fabulous gifts and big hugs Telling me to remain good with friends, mom and dad Before he left, I gave him a kiss I’ll always be good, that was my promise I thank Santa Clause for his wonderful surprise He made my Christmas really great and nice I will now go and share gifts with the other kids Whom he might have missed last Christmas eve ©2014Leonora Galinta All Rights Reserved Dec. 14, 2014 First Place Contest: Story Poem About Santa Judged: 12/28/2015 Sponsor: Carol Eastman

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/23/2017 8:17:00 AM

Dropping by to wish you a Merry Christmas. I enjoyed reading this one. I can see why it was a winner in the contest.

Len Gasun
Date: 12/24/2017 11:49:00 PM

Thank you so much. Merry Christmas too my dear poetic friend, Sir Richard! God bless you and your family.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 12/29/2015 10:12:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Love,Joyce

Skat A

Date: 12/29/2015 6:09:00 PM

LEONORA, Congratulations on your nice win. Enjoy the coming year..... SKAT

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 12/28/2015 6:29:00 PM

Congratulations on the placement of the contest Leonora.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/25/2015 8:56:00 PM

Hello, my wonderful and lovely sis. Sending love and Christmas cheers. I'm blessed to have a wonderful sis and friend like you. You have a beautiful poem, sharing is caring. I'm sending real Christmas hugs... Have a wonderful time.... Forever and ever, Your number one BFF..... LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/22/2015 6:27:00 PM

ahhh, the last part shows the great generosity of your sweet spirit, Leonora. MERRY XMAS , sweetie.

Skat A

Date: 12/20/2015 7:00:00 PM

Leonora, stopped by to enjoy some of my favorite and best poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~

Caycay Jennings

Date: 12/20/2015 4:46:00 PM

I must lay in the gutter! I kept waiting for something rated x to happen, but it turns out that your cute poem ends as innocently as it begins. I enjoyed the read ... CayCay