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Santa, I Want a Mommy Who Doesn'T Weep

Santa, I want a mommy who doesn’t weep, maybe she could have a good night sleep. See, she’s been so down since daddy’s death, I find her all the time catching her breath. Under the tree for me would be a tissue of gold, to wipe away her tears until she grows old. She’s been so nice this year, even though she’s sad, I just want to give her the best Christmas she’s had. Dear Santa, I Want.... Contest December 5, 2017

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Date: 1/2/2018 7:54:00 PM
Congreatulations Laura! Many thanks for sharing, and your support in 2017, have a great 2018, Mick!
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Date: 1/2/2018 10:48:00 AM
Superbly done, Laura. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 12/30/2017 12:47:00 PM
Such a heartfelt, piece I can relate to. Beautifully expressed! Not selfish but selfless and giving... such a sweet wish! Congrats on your win, Laura :)
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Date: 12/29/2017 3:54:00 PM
Coming back with congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 12/29/2017 3:35:00 PM
Such a well-written poem, Laura! Congratulations on your fine placement on such a short list! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/29/2017 1:17:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win, Laura.. Will get to anyone's heart. Hugs eve
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Date: 12/29/2017 1:16:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win, Laura.. Will get to anyone's heart. Hugs eve
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Date: 12/29/2017 1:09:00 PM
aww what an emotional poem luloo:-( we both went for sad poems and seem to have touched the sponsor's heart as we both placed:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/29/2017 11:32:00 AM
This is lovely, Laura, and if wishes are mirrors, you have a lovely reflection. Congrats. Viv x
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Date: 12/29/2017 10:04:00 AM
Hi Laura. I like this. Congrats on your placement.
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Date: 12/29/2017 11:14:00 AM
thank you dear Curtis :)-luloo
Date: 12/6/2017 7:14:00 PM
I bet heaps of kids say this sort of poem to themselves after a family break up of any sort, great stuff laloo
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Date: 12/29/2017 11:13:00 AM
thank you dear Lewis :) -luloo
Date: 12/5/2017 2:36:00 PM
Very sweet, Laura. Love it.
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/29/2017 11:13:00 AM
thank you sweet Line ;)-luloo
Date: 12/5/2017 12:15:00 PM
Laura, this is a beautifully written poem through a child's eyes. I enjoyed this poem. have a nice day my friend.
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/29/2017 11:13:00 AM
thank you sweet Darlene ;)-luloo
Date: 12/5/2017 8:44:00 AM
Very moving poem, luloo, lovely. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 12/29/2017 11:13:00 AM
many thanks lovely Agnes :)-luloo
Date: 12/5/2017 7:25:00 AM
Lovely write, Laura, that is what I started to write, but with a dad havn't finished . Luck in the contest Hugs Eve
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Date: 12/29/2017 11:13:00 AM
thank you sweet Eve :)-luloo

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