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Santa, I Want

Santa I Want... Santa I want a beautiful Christmas, no presents for me, don’t even have a tree I’m asking for forgiveness, I’ve been naughty you see, I wet the bed with my pee I also want people to be nice, to smile at each other passing by, not asking why Maybe to ask for some advise, like can you help me when I cry, with a weary sigh I know what I can ask, can you feed that man on the street that has little to eat One last little task, can you make the world complete, that would be really neat Santa please no more hunger and pain, no more sad tears and no more bad fears Santa I will write to you again until all disappears, to all happy Christmas cheers. Nov.30.2017 Dear Santa, I want... Sponsored by: Kevin Shaw

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Date: 12/24/2017 12:37:00 PM
My best wishes to you WW... And thank you...This year you gave me the idea and title for two wonderful poems...all credit to you... What more can I expect from someone I hardly knew...Again I say, Have a wonderful Christmas and a grateful thank you
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Date: 12/1/2017 11:02:00 PM
Very sweet. Beautifully done.
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Date: 12/1/2017 3:20:00 AM
He sounds like a wise little one indeed, and completely unselfish. I pray all his requests are answered. Beautiful WW and all Peace and Goodwill coming your way from us. Good luck in the contest my friend....Maria
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Date: 11/30/2017 3:31:00 PM
I hope Santa listens, but sadly humans dont pay attention.. Well written my friend.. beautiful sentiments..
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Date: 11/30/2017 3:06:00 PM
Thanks "WW" this is exactly what I asked Santa this year :) a peaceful mind in each of us, a soft hand to reach out, a caring heart to forgive and love more. A beautiful meaningful letter my dear friend. Good luck in the contest... hugs and smiles :)
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Date: 11/30/2017 1:07:00 PM
Beautiful piece. Great Christmas requests. Enjoyed.
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Date: 11/30/2017 12:45:00 PM
A meaningful message of care and love--love the way this poem reads--very well done, WW!
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Date: 11/30/2017 11:58:00 AM
Sweet, Christmas Cheer to you also friend WW...
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