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Wet sand oozes between my toes, gooey as grandma's homemade jam. And imprinted on a clean slate, fresh footprints form along the shore. Gooey as grandma's homemade jam, sand squishes between wiggly toes. And memories are created, exploring these tactile feelings. And imprinted on a clean slate, staggering steps get recorded. A hodgepodge of runaway feet scampering from advancing waves. Fresh footprints form along the shore, only to be quickly erased. Yet, every wave temps others to leave their mark; on the sands of time. (French Retourne) 11/8/2015

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Date: 5/26/2018 9:01:00 PM
Fun poem, Emile.
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Date: 5/27/2018 7:35:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/18/2015 4:24:00 PM
I love the quality of content in this form. Congratulations Emile....:), jill
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Date: 11/18/2015 4:27:00 PM
Thanks Jill, I welcome your comments. Emile.
Date: 11/18/2015 2:06:00 PM
You use this form with poetic ease, Emile, and your interpretation of the painting is nice and creative. Congrats on a merited win. // paul
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Date: 11/18/2015 4:28:00 PM
Thanks Paul, I welcome your comments. Emile.
Date: 11/18/2015 8:13:00 AM
Delightful, congratulations!
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Date: 11/18/2015 8:53:00 AM
Thanks Richard, I appreciate your visit. Emile.
Date: 11/17/2015 9:57:00 PM
Emile, Congratulations, Have a nice day. SKAT
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Date: 11/18/2015 8:57:00 AM
Thanks SKAT, I appreciate your visit. Emile.
Date: 11/17/2015 7:09:00 PM
Congratulations Emile
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Date: 11/18/2015 8:53:00 AM
Thanks Nayda, I appreciate your visit. Emile.
Date: 11/17/2015 6:41:00 PM
very beautiful Emile congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/18/2015 8:52:00 AM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate your visit. Emile.
Date: 11/9/2015 9:35:00 PM
Beautiful Emile!
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Date: 11/10/2015 8:17:00 AM
Thanks once more Arthur, I truly appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 11/9/2015 9:36:00 AM
A beautiful poem. SKAT
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Date: 11/9/2015 10:26:00 AM
Thanks SKAT, I was trying to go to your blog, but I couldn't find it? Emile.

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